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Great chapter!

Poor Sifu Hotman . . .

He has to remember that it was Aang she was saying good-bye to. It would've been so like the Aang of old to hug Zuko too, but I understand that he personalty has grown. That Sifu Hotman dig was pure Aang though.

Katara and Zuko will have a lot to discuss on their voyage home. I can understand his hesitance in his belief that she will be loyal to him. Saying he has lived a rough life would be an understatement.

I do hope that Sokka shows up at some point. Will Suni try to dictate the rights and wrongs to Fire Lord Zuko too? That would be a funny scene. I wonder if Aang's wives will be throwing a party now that Suni is gone.

kyaaaaa omg this chapter melted my insides with amazingness. *__* I kept checking back over the past week or so for a new chapter, and I'm so excited I got to read it! =) It was a great treat at the end of a long day. I don't really have a lot to offer in the way of critiques.. just know that I really enjoy this story and I look forward to reading more. =D Keep the creativity alive!!

Hee hee hee! I loved this chapter! Great job with the characterizations! Keep up the wonderful work and please update again soon!

Truly a great chapter. Can't wait for more.

thank you so much fof the update. I like the vulnerability that you have given Zuko. Cnat wait for more!!

Tempestuous is the best!!! I ould not stop reading. I wished you had elaborated just a bit more on the bed room scene... it was rather anticlimatic and I feel a little cheated. In all other respects I am very, very pleased and cant wait to read more.

oh man, she is going to be pissed when she wakes up. It was her wedding night, she lost her virginity and she wakes up to find her husband gone because he went to go work on some stuff?!? Well, if he wants to create some distance between them, that act will sorely make her frosty when she sees him next.
lovely chapter. wish there was more written on their love making but it doesn't matter, it will still an awesome chapter!

ah, I was waiting for this story to update! Mind I haven't read many Avatar fanfictions, but of them, this is by far my favorite. Not too fast, not too slow, it gets to the point but doesn't leave us wondering if there was something we missed. (Except a LEMON SCENE. WE TOTALLY GOT GYPPED. COME ON THAT WAS UNFAIR.) I love how you write everyone's character, especially Iroh! And Katara and Zuko's awkward alliance and uncomfortable caution towards each other, coupled with unbridled lust, makes for such an interesting dynamic! I look forward to reading more!

This is a great story. I love the writing and I hope to read more and that you also catch the updating bug.

I really like this story. You do not have to rewrite this chapter in my book. It is great. DOT