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for Tempestuous

by YoukaiFate

person Novicegirl
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It is not good to walk into a room when people are talking and assume things. I want to see how this gets resolved so update soon. Great chapter Novicegirl
person Myliana
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really great story, I am looking for more patiently of course.
person Ky
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter... I wait until next time.
person Symetrical break
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good stuff. I wait for the next chapter.
person luna26
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wohooo! review number 60! I don't know how I managed it but I missed your last update entirely...my bad. I simply love this story!! poor poor Iroh...insert foot into mouth :) I think Zuko is going to need to add a relationship interpreter to his staff if he's going to survive the first months of marriage without sinking. Update soon I promise to check in everyday and shamelessly flatter your muse on demand. Keep up the great work.
person Allure
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Drama ahead I see...great chapter waiting for the next Blueviper
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, I laughed out loud over Suni's reaction to poor Iroh. Katara breaking down over her father's absence was heartbreaking. Zuko seems to excel at showing up at the wrong place and the wrong time. What an evil cliffhanger to live us with. I will patiently wait for the next installment. ^__^

person Alauralen
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ouch! Shouldn't he know that you can't just walk into the middle of a conversation and assume that you know what the whole thing was about? Though, that did seem pretty cut and dry. I wonder if she can convince him of whom she was really thinking about. I really feel so bad for both of them! Hopefully they will be able to come to terms and get past this quickly. Great job, as usual! LOVED this chapter! Please update again soon!
person Nicole
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This fic is made of awesome and win and please email me when you update because I can not wait for more!
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, well um this is the first review I've given to an avatar fic, and I've read so many lol I really enjoy your story I like how you go into detail with each person and show just how hard it is to adjust. I can see how you trying to keep them in check, and you even voice it with your story, Katara's need to be herself yet to change to fit the role she is now given. Its wonderful and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Great job!