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April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh please don't give up on this story...you're doing great!
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March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the story and I enjoy the character development you have going on. XD I can't wait for the next chapter!
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow this fantastic. Please continue.
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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my goodness suni what have you done? great job on this story i really do hope you don't change katara, a lot of authors change her to suit the role of fire lady but please don't cause i think that's why we love katara cause she's strong and resilient. i do hope she gets to solve her problem with zuko...and one more thing can you please kill off suni i find her annoying i guess i feel what katara is feeling towards her so good job. update soon
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February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this, please update soon kthxbai. Can Suni be less useless? Or can she get hit by a rock or something?
I really like the equal footing you have Zuko and Katara on right now. But for some reason when people write Zuko they like to forget how much he enjoys putting his own foot in his mouth. He's spent his whole life mouthing off as a bratty teen, and now that he finally doesn't have to answer to anyone that's just going to stop? Nuh-uh, I don't think so. Pure social awkwardness never dies. Make that boy talk! Even if he says stupid things that get him into trouble! Don't make it all mysterious looks and cold silences, those are boring!
I really like the equal footing you have Zuko and Katara on right now. But for some reason when people write Zuko they like to forget how much he enjoys putting his own foot in his mouth. He's spent his whole life mouthing off as a bratty teen, and now that he finally doesn't have to answer to anyone that's just going to stop? Nuh-uh, I don't think so. Pure social awkwardness never dies. Make that boy talk! Even if he says stupid things that get him into trouble! Don't make it all mysterious looks and cold silences, those are boring!
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February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this a lot, I hope to see more.
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I am really enjoying reading this story. I started yesterday but had to leave. I was determined to finish because I had too. Do continue... WalkingPapers
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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It is not good to walk into a room when people are talking and assume things. I want to see how this gets resolved so update soon. Great chapter Novicegirl
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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It is not good to walk into a room when people are talking and assume things. I want to see how this gets resolved so update soon. Great chapter Novicegirl