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i really like the story i had seen it before but i didn't want to read it until it got to a certain number of chapters. both characters are well written and a good thing is that you are able to have a bit of freedom in how they should interact since they are a lot older now. I hope to see a new chapter up soon i'll be waiting impatiantly!

I really, really like your story and your style. I was so happy to see chapter 8 posted. Please update soon as this is one of the more intriguing fan fictions that I have read.

Yay an update :D, I've been stalking this piece of fiction for a long time waiting for an update and it was well worth the wait. I love the way you've had them grow up, but in such a way that they haven't really lost the core of themselves. Katara's still got her temper and Zuko's still a bit of a prig, its just more tempered now. "I like turtle-ducks" was completely random and absolutely perfect. I cant wait for the next chapter.

UPDATE!!!!! ... please?

I greatly enjoy this fic! I'm a die-hard Zutarian. (not to the point of arguing whichever way the series takes, mind you.) I like how you ended this chapter. It made me laugh so hard... I think I made my boyfriend worry for not answering him right away because of it! XD He understands I'm a fangirl, but doesn't understand the finer points of being a fangirl. I look forward to reading much more!

Yours,
Kaze

Yay! Thanks for updating! I LOVED this chapter. The awkwardness between them was very well done and so believable! This chapter was well worth the wait! I'm glad that your muse has returned to you! Keep up the great work and please update as soon as you're able!

Hey! You wrote another chapter! Good! I liked it. I like reading what is going on in Iroh's mind. I also love how you unfold the relationship like a flower, petal by petal. I think that you convey the right level of character complexity, in a way that feels authentic. Your characters may be playing their own games, going away from you and doing things on their own, but you still rein them in with a firm, albeit soft, hand. That is why I like your story. It is lyrical with glimpses of rawness. The way real life romance feels. Keep writing, please. I will keep checking to see if you posted! (P.S. I know I said that I am not into smut, and afterwards I felt the comment a bit patronizing. I like lemons, like any other normal healthy person. But I like lemons that are part of a story, that fit like a puzzle piece. I should have said instead that "Plot, what Plot?" is not my thing. So sorry for the comment. You see, English is not my first language, so I am not sure if 'smut' is a deprecating word. Maybe is not and my concerns are unfounded.) Cheers!

I really, truly, liked your story. It is very well written, specially the little journeys into the main characters' heads. I was reading it last night at the wee hours of the morning and ... can't wait to know what happens next! Did you stop writing this story altogether? I think that you have real momentum going on here. It is not perfect, but it is intense. Yes, maybe there are some bits OOC but the overall result is truly engaging, and I am not the kind of person to waste time reading bad literature. I am actually not into smut, I ended up here because an author that I like from FanFiction.net posted some stories here and I was reading hers when I stumbled upon yours. I loved the Zutara interaction, would love to read more of their conversations and in general, want to know what happens next! I agree with some of your fans that Suni deserves to be pushed over a cliff, or at least Katara should put her in her place. I am not snobbish, but no way would I let anyone speak to me like that, regardless of intentions. The 'misunderstanding' plot (where one character overhears and misunderstands another) is somehow trite, specially because Shakespeare milked it to death, but by now I trust your abilities as a writer to take it forward without dragging it endlessly. I think that your recreation of the post-war ATLA world is fantastic, your Zuko is "tha man", Iroh deeply believable and cannot encourage you enough to keep writing the story.

Oh No!
Please update this soon!! Cant wait to read the rest.
Also, what happened to that lemon for chapter 5?
I hope its coming :D
Cheers,
Chip~

i actually laughed out loud and giggled and it's really hard to make me do that so props to you. your story is awesome and i cant wait for you to continue it!

you are a pretty amazing writer and i think that you captured the characters well.

looking forward to the next chapter