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August 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Maybe you could finish? But other than that, great story! The last at the end of chapter 8 made me laugh. Your a great writer keep up the good work!:)
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July 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i love your style of writing. :) the syntax is superb. update soon! i want to hear about the turtle ducks.
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December 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
reread it, still love it...any chance for an update
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October 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Being an erstwhile fanfiction writer myself, I understand how difficult it can be to keep a fanfiction going. I love this story, and I would dearly love to see what else happens between these two. If you have a few spare moments, it would be wonderful if you could continue it.
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July 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please is this story still continuing? I really hope I just can't wait to see what happens next!!!!! :-)
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July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the Zuko's attempts at conversation! It reminds me of him talking to the frog when he is trying to join up with the gaang and convince them that he is good!!! UPDATE soon!!
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June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Please continue it. It is well written and very believable. Thank you.
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December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's been a long time since you've updated, but I only found the story yesterday and must seriously beg you to continue it. It's an interesting take on the Zuko/Katara pairing, and very faithful to both the characters' personalities.
Also, I have to tell you, I'd worship you as a god if you'd put that wedding night lemon in.
Also, I have to tell you, I'd worship you as a god if you'd put that wedding night lemon in.
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August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
I've only recently become a fan of Avatar fanfiction and I feel that your story Tempestuous is one of the better ones that have been written. It's such a shame that it has been sitting unfinished here for over a year. The way you write Zuko and Katara reminds much of how they interacted throughout the series though they did have some bonding moments toward the end of season three. I love the mix of pride, loneliness and vunerability they both convey in there personalities. It's one of the reason's I and I'm sure a lot of others are fans of this paring. Though to a degree it almost seems like Zuko's taken a bit of a step back in how he acts, more like the hard pride filled prince of the first season. Though I'm sure that's mostly a mask as he doesn't want to appear weak, especially after the ending of the war and his defection against his own family. I am hoping to see him truly start to open up to Katara and that she will likewise do so. Iroh will be good for Zuko and be a help in getting him to open up to Katara. Though I will admit to wanting to throttle Suni. As well meaning as she is, her not allowing Katara to get a word in edgewise is leading to both comical and potentially dangerous missunderstandings. Like when she assumed Katara was in love with Aang and Zuko overheard. I know she's from the earth nation and her attitude is a lot like Toph's because of that but even people of the earth kingdom need to learn to listen and wait. And then just as Zuko is making an attempt to open up over dinner, the story stops. I'd love to see how the rest of the meal turns out, a they try to get to know each other better. I would really look forward to more from this as they try to bond. Aside from the similar pains of loosing family due to the war, and the hard lessons both learned. Fighting stereotypes placed on both of them will lead to some steamy confrontations. Please, if you haven't lost the muse for this story, I'd love for you to continue with it. It's a shame something of this quality would be left abandoned and unfinished.
I've only recently become a fan of Avatar fanfiction and I feel that your story Tempestuous is one of the better ones that have been written. It's such a shame that it has been sitting unfinished here for over a year. The way you write Zuko and Katara reminds much of how they interacted throughout the series though they did have some bonding moments toward the end of season three. I love the mix of pride, loneliness and vunerability they both convey in there personalities. It's one of the reason's I and I'm sure a lot of others are fans of this paring. Though to a degree it almost seems like Zuko's taken a bit of a step back in how he acts, more like the hard pride filled prince of the first season. Though I'm sure that's mostly a mask as he doesn't want to appear weak, especially after the ending of the war and his defection against his own family. I am hoping to see him truly start to open up to Katara and that she will likewise do so. Iroh will be good for Zuko and be a help in getting him to open up to Katara. Though I will admit to wanting to throttle Suni. As well meaning as she is, her not allowing Katara to get a word in edgewise is leading to both comical and potentially dangerous missunderstandings. Like when she assumed Katara was in love with Aang and Zuko overheard. I know she's from the earth nation and her attitude is a lot like Toph's because of that but even people of the earth kingdom need to learn to listen and wait. And then just as Zuko is making an attempt to open up over dinner, the story stops. I'd love to see how the rest of the meal turns out, a they try to get to know each other better. I would really look forward to more from this as they try to bond. Aside from the similar pains of loosing family due to the war, and the hard lessons both learned. Fighting stereotypes placed on both of them will lead to some steamy confrontations. Please, if you haven't lost the muse for this story, I'd love for you to continue with it. It's a shame something of this quality would be left abandoned and unfinished.
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June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am hoping that you didn't abandon this story, because it is definitely my favorite Zutara fic! I hope that maybe you will update soon?