rate_review Reviews

Great story so far.. hoping to see more.

Keep up the great work.
Looking forward to more of your PWP (porn WITH plot)

*chuckles to self*

Great story like how it's shaping up so far and I can't wait to see where you decide to go with it. As far as takin to the whole consequence and out of fantasy I just have to say "I don't know darkened your soul, but may god have mercy on it." Will Ferrel Good Cop Baby Cop. To each his own though I'd like to see what you have planned. Surprise me.

Great story so far. I love the relationship your building between the two characters, and can see all sorts of mayhem happening. Youre writing style is very good and I like the way I can so easily visualize the action. Some authors dont seem to have this ability. I eagerly look forward to seeing where you take this.
Skeeve

Ejoying the story very much. Hope you can still continue.