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I love this story and hope you update it soon. BTW could you have Ron spank Shego at some point, depending on how you go with it it could be hot or funny as hell

This is definitely nitpicking, and in no way really detracts from your story being enjoyable, but it's kind of like a nagging itch to some people who've had to study stuff like this for one reason or another. Just a hysterectomy isn't going to do squat for Ovarian cancer. If the cancer is in the ovaries, then just removing the uterus isn't really fixing the problem. Even if done together, oophorectomy (removal of ovaries) and hysterectomy (removal of uterus) are still considered two different procedures. I apologize if this part of my review annoys you, but not saying something felt like being repeatedly poked in the head by someone's finger.

Umm, maybe it was just me, but the mention of Ron's nose turning brown kind of ruined the moment when I was reading it. Even if it was just a euphemism, or innuendo, I actually had to skip to the dialogue afterwards, because I just couldn't read that oral part anymore.

By the way, if you feel the need to respond to either this, or my other review, I'm on ffDOTnet, same username.

While I'm not going to argue that Robin is probably a much better fighter than Ron, it still bothers me that you make it seem like he's totally useless, despite the fact that he did step up during the invasion (and plenty of times when Monkey Fist, and Yamanouchi was involved), and Shego saw it happen. Or are you disregarding the end of the series completely?

Seriously, you'd think they'd remember his name after saving the world, right? Hell, you'd think Kim, of all people, might say something about it. He is her 'best friend' after all.

“I don’t think the Naco is my favorite food anymore,”- This is easily my favorite line in this story so far.

“See what happens when you take a chance?”- I'm thinking that this sums up the whole of this story quite nicely.

plz you gotta write more this story is very nice in the way of RonGo and i love any good KP fic

I hope you make more. The chemistry between the two of them is interesting which is very difficult to pull off. I just hope the shego character stays in charge. Keep writing and reading.

Diggin the story so far my friend I do like the fact that you did decide to keep Shego in her usual bitchy and angry character. Love changes you but it doesn't make you a pussy. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters

Hell Yeah, that is way to cool.

I don't care what shego say,there slow starting a relationship.And i can wait to see kim reaction from all this when she out.I see anger,yelling,jelloing and a big throw down with her and shego.But then again they choice to end there relationship together that's what he keep telling himself.

I loved the banter between the two lovers. It is something both of them do naturally in the show, but to see it in this context is great! I cant wait to see the next chapter.