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Hmm, I think the only issue I can really take with this, is thinking that Ron would have been a bit more self-confident. He did save the world, and he knows how to access his MMP. Even if he's matured and humble enough not to let something like that go to his head like he might have in the past, he wouldn't be a complete pushover now, would he? Not only that, but Shego, having witnessed it would know at least that much.

Either way, it's still great.

Very interesting. You really captured their characters well and it was pretty funny in different parts. I can't find a lot of Rongo fics on here but I'd have to say this is the best one.

I really like this story and the sequel. Both are well written I especially enjoy how you keep them in character. It's almost like I'm reading an idea for an episode that never came to be. I really hope you continue with this series.

I quite enjoyed this.

Great job. =D

Two words: "Write more"

But in all seriousness, i really liked this pairing and the way you wrote it. I hope to see more of you work soon!

Really liked the story. I liked the sensual twist to Shego's comet powers that you threw in there too. Also I do understand what you're talking about with the whole Shego goes from Tiger to Kitten when she gets with Ron in most stories. I do also enjoy the stories where she keeps some of her normal ire and attitude or at least has a good reason for letting down her defenses a bit to show that she doesn't have to be the bad ass merc chick all of the time. The stories where she keeps up her dominating attitude and still shows her feminitity (not sure this is spelled right or acutally a word) do tend to hold the attention better and make for better stories. They are few and far between but they are out there. Most of the time people get carried away with the whole psychlogical aspect of Shego and trust building, but I'm rambling. Great story as I said I love the whole strong, forceful, dominant female angle. I love take charge woman! Whoo!

Pretty good.

I don't think that the 'pedestal' or 'Kim moves on fast' cliches needed to be included, as they just seemed to distract from what should be a relationship between others. If not just some quick justification then it deserved to unfold on its own within the story.

Still, I though that story was really good, and I especially liked Shego's 'forceful' treatment of Ron. I'd ask for a sequel, but I see you've already written one.

Great story! I love a good Rongo.