rate_review Reviews

You should beta this story since now there are several typos (you confused the words "her" and "here") and grammatical errors. Your tenses change randomly.

Also the chapter is quite short. For a reader, there's not whole lot to really get into the story.

This is an old story and I don't know if you're going to continue working on it, but I'd personally like to see more Tarzan fanfiction!

Keep writing. :)