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for Don't Let Go

by Alcaloid

person sean
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
apreciation cant go far enough

not many will put some much gall into their own bio
but then practice and out perform the standards that you placed upon yourself

good job and great story

it leaves you wanting more

hopefully well see some soon
person king of perverts
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it very good continue or write another atla femslash.
person Spleef
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was one hell of a good read.
person Lefty
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Great story
person king of perverts
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice very good. think you could do a mai/azula.
person Bane of existence
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay...

I read your profile. Well, I kind of stopped after the third sentence and decided to read your story.


I do think this story could be better than it is. It seems kind of rushed and after school specialish at the end of it. Is there a plot or is it PWP? However, I have to say at least your spelling was good.