rate_review Reviews

it is very good hope to read the next chapter soon.
i hope gwen does do ben.

Gwen is hot for her age. I love the story so far, keep it up :)

Sweet! Great start! can't wait to read more!!

A very good start. I don't think Vilgax deserves any good times with Gwen so I seriously hope that Ben does rescue Gwen and then... huh. I don't know, Heatblast roasting Vilgax's tentacles, Diamond Head cercomcizing him? Wild Mutt ripping off said parts, Cannonbolt thunder rolling vilgax in the reproductive system? Heck even Eyeguy giving vilgax an eye full. And then oh boy I hope that Ben's alien form isn't in heat. Cause I can't wait to see what happens next.

I'm liking the premise of this story a lot. Vilgax trying to impregnate Gwen is something that I have thought about MANY times, because she is a hottie and a half.