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Wow Vlad really did just use Danny. I wonder what will happen to him now

mg omg omg omg omg please update soon!

I really like your fic. I can't wait to see what Danny will do, hopefully Sam and Tucker will get to him or he will find a way-out.

I'm afraid you may be right about Vlad in this fic - he's not so much of a thinker, is he? He will never have Danny completely, at least realistically. He wrote his own failure in the begonning when he chose to begin with using him invaluably from the get go - I know this as both a Domme and a Psychology major. To bend Danny's will as a nonconsensual completely to Vlad, the way he took it, would take anywhere from three years to a decade - unfortunately, I don't believe this fits within Vlad's intended timeframe. It would have been much more useful if Vlad had just been damned patient and 'earned' Danny's trust, sidetracking any shortcoming and turning it back on Danny as his own fault - any punishment, for example. Read up on Stokholm Syndrome. Humans are social pack animals and long for the contact of others. As a lonely captive, and a teenage boy at that, Danny would have gone along with whatever Vlad wanted in short order, I'd imagine. It's an automatic human defensive manouver we have wired into us. Even better if more traits of BDSM were to be involved; everything from ownership - collars, markings and the like - to sexual activity. It's a binding sort of thing, famous for making one genuinely desperate to please at a rapid rate. That's what BDSM is designed to do - it's manipulating our natural primal instincts as pack animals for pleasure.

Not that I don't enjoy the fic. I do. Read every word so far. I just can't stop shaking my head at Vlad whenever he makes such mistakes as he does, so I had to rant at something. Maybe you're planning something else; not like I know where you're taking the story, right?

I don't know how long it's been since this was last updated (Four months? Five?). There's narry a whisper of life left in the fandom, save the last gasps of the truly devoted. Yet I still dredge the bottom of this murky lake, hoping to find something to satisfy myself with...

I just made myself sound like a depraved necrophiliac, didn't I? Ah well...

This was a surprising pleasure to read. I don't usually go for rape fics, but I very much enjoyed this one. I do hope you keep writing it.

Wow! What a good story. ^_^ I was in the mood for something to read and stumbled onto to this. Good job.

Finally!!!

submissive Danny in ch8 is sooooooooooooo sexy! i think you're a little addicted to the words 'the man'. i mean, you used it 4 times in 3 sentences "Danny groaned slightly, meeting the man’s tongue with his own, tasting the man voluntarily for the first time. He moaned as he felt the man slowly beginning to remove the towel from his waist. He wouldn’t have minded that the man was removing it, but he was still rather cold." no offence but i think a little variation is in order. loved the fic!

Oh, I hope you get your laptop working again soon, I love this story! Really, it was the first thing I read when I got home and I didn't stop until I got to the last chapter, making you the creator of my little ray of sunshine for the day, thank you very much. Did I forget to beg that you update soon? For my sake? Please?

its great and it grabs ur senses! i think you should continue quickly or there will be deaths! *sweat drop* just joking. maybe.