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for Another Long Way Out

by Jayrich

person Ron
schedule April 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I loved it all so much.I hope she gets pregnant.
person Ron
schedule April 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter too it was awesome beyond awesome .I hope she gets pregnant too.And he has to date both twins .And when he gets back with Rose she's cool with it and join the in .And that Spud and Trixie get together so he can finally fuck her pussy.
person the guy you know and well
schedule January 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
dude add more chapters please. thx... reply to me if you are.
schedule April 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You conviced me JakexSaraXKara all the way.

schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's nicely written without being overly written. You have a talent for putting in story but not to much of it. But I would like to see this story continue, the ending leaves open possibilities for continuation that I hope you at least try.
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are like some sort of fiction writing god. Please don't stop making great stories!
person flyer23
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woderful second chapter.
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GhostwriterMO-And here we thought what you did with Kim Possible was great. You have surprised me and my girl with this one. She likes jake, I like kim. COuld you please keep up the great work you are 'doing' on this story. GHostpen69-Any chance of the twins making out with jake at the same time? Or some dragon bondage? I can't wait for your next story. Ta Ta
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is awesome!