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by Michael64

person skoshi4
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you heard Kim, Ron owes her another one!
person Goeleven
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice. you might consider exspanding beyond a one-shot and into a storyark type fic.
Good luck with future writing!
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice story at least in this one Ron didn't end up running down the street naked.