rate_review Reviews

I've been following your story since chapter eight or so and all I can say is bravo. It is the only story on AFF that actually made me come back to check on it (once I forgot what it was called and spent a solid hour searching for it). The story is well formatted, easy to read, and good with spelling and grammar. Your over arching story was also compelling, and I found your portrayal of Azula particularly fascinating (so much so that I'm attempting to write some fan fiction of my own). Furthermore, your descriptive style of writing lends itself particularly well to both the smut and battle scenes, and the former were always wonderfully executed and creative. If I could pick a favourite author on the site it would be a good tossup between you and Dovienya with no one else even coming close.

That being said, I wasn't particularly fond of the ending. Given how well the story was paced this could really have been done in three chapters instead of one. There were a few plot threads that were severed entirely, and I was kind of sad not to see them resolve themselves. Given the amount of time you've spent on the story it's understandable that you probably want to get it over with. And the one sour spot (for me) does nothing to diminish the greatness of your story. I can only hope that one day I have the discipline to work on a story long enough to create something as well crafted as your piece here. A marvellous story and I hope you do indeed keep writing because the site itself will probably be diminished due to your absence

yo, how about sokka and katura get it on

I really love how you take advantage of bending talents and theorized natural occurrences for benders' bodies. Zuko's sizzling seed, and the waterbenders icing Azula were genius!

Sacred Carp! This was a great chapter!

I swear, I'm going to read and reread this story to death...

I just finished reading chapter 10, and I have to say, this is one of the greatest Mature Avatar stories I have ever read... and It's not even finished yet! I can't wait to get into the next chapters!

This was amazing... please keep writing more, you have me on the edge of my seat!

I have always thought it, and this chapter just confirmed it.

Azula is one nasty teenager. I mean, the things she is able, and very willing, to do are just insane...

That said, Kudos to Zuko for finally pulling his head out of his ass and realising his feelings for Mai are more powerful than Azula's lust for him.

Good job!

Hey man, I can't say much that hasn't already been said better by most people on this review page, which is in itself a cliche; I'm not entirely sure if this diminishes the writing quality in this review by some multiple of 6 or something. In any case, no matter how awkward my writing is, I'd like to express my appreciation of your fearless and inventive attitude towards the sex scenes in your story. The overall narrative is compelling as well, and I totally feel for you insofar as you're busy with school for regular updates. Still the story is turning kinda epic and it looks like you may have some trouble finishing it anytime soon. Cheers.

nice to see you back