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Very Very interesting. I have been working on a story of my own, and have plans for something similar. I will have to give your ideas more thought. The story itself is very well crafted, and has left me eagerly awaiting further installments. Keep up the great work your doing.

Hey sorry we're late with the review long story.., actually long vacation. (Down girl. Actually I like it on top.) Ahem sorry about that... Me and my girlfriend love your stories on FF and AFF. Please keep up the go work and I hope Kim beats Zorpox's twisted game and gets her Ron back. On seperate story but still about a story we hope to see you update your Hero's Legacy soon. Here is an interesting fact the voice actor that does Ron also did the voice for Terry Mc Genis in Batman Beyond. (just to give you some ideas) My girlfriend thinks that Kim is going to get jealous of Squirrel Girl if Ron saves her from the villians running around Middleton. But still keep the great work we all love. Please and Thank you very much.

Hi. Great job again. And extra points for including real life issues (eating, bathroom, etc). There are too many fics where a person is restrained for days, with no mention of going to the bathroom, eating, shower, etc. So bonus points on that. Looking forward to seeing where this story goes. Love the interaction between Kim and Ron/Zorpox.

In honest opinion your right on this chapter. Me and my girlfriend didn't like this one at all. My girlfriend did a report on the women movement to vote and women that were imprisoned and would go on hunger strike would be fed through a tube similar to that only they were forced down their throuts. This usually caused some severe damage. Ghostpen69: we know rape is a horrible thing but I hope that Zorpox doesn't hurt Kim to much mentally. GhostwriterMO: I hope Ron kicks the sadistic mental $#!+ out of him!!! But still it's a good story at surprising you while you read it.

You know... completely ignore my first comment over at FF.net, looks like you already did (they really need to look at putting author alerts in for this site lol).

Knowing you're putting it, you can really cut loose, and I am looking forward to that quite a bit.

Eagerly awaiting more!

I thought for a first chapter it wasn't bad as there has always been something between Ron and Kim which is usually only Kim's way as in most things she has to be on top of every situation. With Ron's bad side as Zorpox Kim is now he one with little or no control over her Destiny unless something happens to change that.

Also with Kim not being able to fight her own emotions Zorpox might be able to break Kim Possible without any device to bend her will

Dude me and my girlfriend have been reading your work on FanFiction.net for a while and can only say that you are our favorite writer. Unfortunately we're having trouble leaving reviews on your excellent work (not from a lack of trying though). "Dark Legacy" and "Hero's Legacy" are my favorites but my girlfriend "Ms. Ghostpen69" loves "It's Good to be Bad" and I know she likes this new one. So from both of us please keep up the excellent A+ writing and please update soon.