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Can't wait to read more maybe he could while blindfolded put up a camera without her knowin and make her say "my name is kim possible and I'm a sex slave for my master to do with as he sees fit"

Holy crap! I just read this story and cant wait to see what happens next! Very well written and insane detail :)

Well obviously the story is over now, but I figure I'll review it anyway.

Basically; good job. This gave me alot of ideas for my own stuff, and I liked that you showed every part of Kim's breakdown rather than using some convenient plot device to bring about her enslavement. It made it feel more real, and that was a most welcome change of pace compared to most fanfics.

I'd say it's a shame you went with a 'good end' but...I know how hard those are to avoid, and I can't blame you. Having 'bad ends' often seems like being edgy for the sake of it, particularly if it doesn't help the theme you're trying to follow. I can't say for sure what your theme was, but a good end serves it just as well as a bad one would have done.

So...again, good job here.

I hope there's more to this. It's really good. I'm curious to see how it's going to end.

Please update soon - this is a great story so far.

Oohh plelase continue! I'm liking it and I can't wait to read more.

Hey we're back again.. well actually I am Ghostpen69 aka my girlfriend went to visit her sisters and family. Once again a great chapter in the story as always. If you'll give me one moment..."@#$% *&^% and @#$#$^&&*(! She was so darn close to geting away and to get help. The combination was probably her own birthday or locker combenation, lousy blue skin @$$#0(3, couldn't measure up to Ron's lifetime with Kim has to do mindgames on her. From what happen next 'help' and hope might be alot closure than we all think. Please keep up the great work and I hope you update all your great stories. Remember you pierce a piece of paper with a pen with your ideas in a story just like a carpenter hammers nails into wood to build a house.

Another great pair of chapters. I've been expecting Kim to try something but you caught me by surprise. Of course Zorpox seemed to expect it...

Anxiously awaiting the next move in this very intricate game...

So, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. good story so far.

Man great new chapter did not see that you coming at all I mean damn. Now I'm really anxious to see what you got planned next for Kim.