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for Been sixteen is hard

by flyer23

schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
An AWESOME idea but it was soo hard to read and like 20 chapters too short.
I look forward to some sequls and suff!
person Leftshoe
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad beginning. The grammar and spelling could be improved. I wonder who the dad is? It could be danny or dash. Ooo!