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shot at blown up and blown out of the sky forced to take a flying leap literally and what saves the day? a flashback ... hell of a good way to pull that 'miracle' off ... course the steam cooked private bits might be a bit ... tender ... for a good long time

definitely looking forward to the next in this story

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I knew Shego was still alive and I can't wait for when she joins the action of the tournament with kim and ron. Hmmm maybe some kim,ron, and shego action non-violent of course. Unless S&M is her choice. Yikes. SO Keep up the great work and action in the story. Please and thank you

I came for some hot kp action and I GOT IT!!! A lot of kick butt, a little to much gore, but a very cool read. Or in other words come for the sexy ladys but stay for the Kung Fu fury. I can't wait to see kim and ron 'hooking up' later in the story or some more action. Heck I'm hoping for Ron+Kim+Shego in the story. So keep up the great writing.

and now Kim enters the tournament, her entrance alone makes the fight something to witness but with Ron involved and that list of 'the best of the best' combined with the other reason Kim was sent ... well it should be ... amazing to say the least

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Dr. Director needed that wake up call for certain, and i gotta admit I was as surprised as she was. not by Kim's outburst but by the fact that they didn't think ... course when it comes to certain people its not their habit to think so in a way its not as surprising ... as for the anomalies ... Shego just made tp of a list she doesn't want to be on and it's not even her fault this time. GJ best hope that if they go after Shego with intent to kill that Kim never finds out

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iv really enjoyed this story from beginning to the current last chapter ... its so well developed and complex and yet still an awesome read, very hard to pull that off when you take the hard road but you've done excellently with it ... cant wait to see what happens next

I really appreciate the length of this story. I also like your scene with Kim in chapter one, and I like that you've kept much of the direction ambiguous for now. Kim was into Shego in Chapter One-- but it doesn't seem as if that's the whole of your plan for this story. It doesn't look like predictable story, and it's got some fun moments too. :)