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The Constitution of the Republic of Uzbekistan asserts that "democracy in the Republic of Uzbekistan shall be based upon common human principles, according to which the highest value shall be the human being, his life, freedom, honour, dignity and other inalienable rights."

Good to have you back.

Another fine chapter, and now we are left to chew our nails waiting for the next one. ;)

Ugh. More butchery. This is one bloody story. but, don't STOP for pete's sake.

I really like not knowing what's gonna happen next. One nitpick tho from a chapter ago. I really couldn't see Shego saying 'Bollocks' under any circumstances. I can't say what she WOULD say, but it definitely wouldn't be that. In fact, when angered or frustrated and with nothing to hit, she usually will clench her fists, grind her teeth together, and snarl "URRRRGG!!" :D

Not bad. It's kind of clear you're stepping back a little to let the story coalesce in your head a bit more but still a good chapter. I never did know what people do all day at those spas. Now some things are obvious at this point and others aren't. It's clear that Kim and Ron are going to bump into each other and it's clear that Shego's going to pop up again in some capacity, but it is not knowing how it's going to happen that keeps me coming back. Keep up the good work :)

I had lost track of this story a few weeks ago and kept looking under ffdotnet, but then I remembered that it was in AdultFanFiction. You write like a pro, keep it up!

Friend, I only just discovered this story and I COULDN'T PUT IT DOWN!!!! THIS IS A MONSTER!!!! A MASTERPIECE!!! A MONSTERPIECE!!!!! all of that said, I, too, found it difficult to read the depredations of the Uzbeks. I remember being Kim's age and that would have very much been my reaction at that age, too. To this day I've STILL never worked up the courage to watch the Texas Chainsaw Massacre. Being assaulted and traumatized by such images at that age can be a truly life-altering experience, but what I REALLY love how you used that to set the stage for the confrontation between Kim and Dr. Director. Looks like our little Kimmy's grown up a bit more than we'd expect and Dr. Directot has finally been brutally cronfronted with her own irresponsibility, but I also see the doctor's perspective. For long time, I have been writing a story in my head a storyline about a man with certain powers who finds his way to Springwood and comes into direct conflict with the infamous Freddy Krueger. This man researches Kruger exhaustively and finds ways to insert himself between Krueger and his prey. When one of the bolder kids targeted says to the man, "I can take whatever he has!" the man with "That doesn't mean you should have to." The principle is the same here. Just because Kim CAN intercede in such a 'sitch' and yield positive results doesn't mean it's a good idea. She is at most 17 years old at this point and the scars which she would bear coming away from such a thing would be significant indeed. There's a reason why people aren't accepted into the military before 18 and that is also the same reason why former child soldiers are all mentally ill. I don't know what you're take on Season Four is. I don't know if you're going to write to it, around it, or in direct contradiction to it, but whatever the case, I can't wait to see, because I'm SURE it will be epic. Lastly, Shego isnow laying naked on the coast of Africa which has more rapists in it than any other continent in the world. I traly TRULY grieve for the ones that find her. ;)

I like your writing style. Expecting to enjoy this story.

as the saying goes absence of proof is not proof of absence ... with all the telltales and clues theres two ways to wager, either she lived or she died ... considering this is Shego smart money is on the former as opposed to the latter unfortunately that makes the road ahead much worse for Shego since she will likely, should she have survived, get placed on the top priority: must terminate list

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