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August 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is really cute, but too short. Are you planning to continue?
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January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this looks promising i hope you finally get all of the review s you desire
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December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh GOD there is so many things wrong with this story. First of all, don't even bother writing it if the chapters aren't going to be at the very least, a page long. GET A BETA READER! Seriously, I may not be the best speller in the world but I got a headache trying to read that crap. At the very least, use the Spell Checker that's provided for you because it's obvious you didn't even try.
And for the love of god, what the HELL is with this stupid fad of people making lame ass 'original characters' that just HAVE to be another Powerpuff Girl or Rowdyruff Boy? What happened to people actually being original with their story lines and plots, OC's or not, keeping the canonical characters well, in character and not having to resort to the lame ole "OMG, I mades a new PPG but I'll, tweak the personality or put them on the wrong sidez or something, Tee Hee! cAUSE No ones done THAT before!!!!1111"
It's not just the PPG's either. The fucking Mary Sue in Harry Potter. The 'fifth' Ninja Turtle. The lame ass OC female hedgehog who is either spunky and 'cool' or Mary Sue like nice that just HAPPENS to make Shadow fall in love with her because she's his exact opposite or 'reminds him of Maria'. Or oh! The hedgehog female Mary Sue that Sonic (and sometimes Shadow and Knuckles) happen to fall in love with! The lame ass recolored Sonic (canon characters not withstanding) OC hedgehog guy that comes out of fucking no where and is strangely, more awesome than everyone in existence. Or one of my other 'favorites': yet another damn half-ghost in the Danny Phantom universe that (if a guy) becomes Danny's rival or (if a girl) he falls in love with. And lets not forget the good ole 'Ryu has a child (usually girl) from a one night stand who later finds him and causes drama between him and (usually) Chun Li and has a thing for Mel' OC.
OC's are seriously becoming the bane of existence for all of fanfiction these days.
NO, your character is NOT that awesome. NO, your character isn't even 'original' because a few stories down, someone has a OC just like it. NO, we don't know or give a shit who the hell it is, so stop pretending like it's been in the canon story all along (with the way you write it) because unlike, we don't get it! And FUCK NO, they are not more important then the ACTUAL canon stars of the fiction you were writing about in the first place. Stop putting them in every damn scene or making the story about them! It's a fucking Powerpuff Girls fanfiction, I want to focus on the damn GIRLS, not some lame ass imitation that's 'original' because they're OMFG: a ROWDYRUFF Girl.
GRRRAAAA!
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Got a little ranty there. I'm sorry. ^^'
But seriously, your story sucks so much I kinda just went to that rant-like dark place.
Gonna go read a good PPG fanfiction now. Geez.
And for the love of god, what the HELL is with this stupid fad of people making lame ass 'original characters' that just HAVE to be another Powerpuff Girl or Rowdyruff Boy? What happened to people actually being original with their story lines and plots, OC's or not, keeping the canonical characters well, in character and not having to resort to the lame ole "OMG, I mades a new PPG but I'll, tweak the personality or put them on the wrong sidez or something, Tee Hee! cAUSE No ones done THAT before!!!!1111"
It's not just the PPG's either. The fucking Mary Sue in Harry Potter. The 'fifth' Ninja Turtle. The lame ass OC female hedgehog who is either spunky and 'cool' or Mary Sue like nice that just HAPPENS to make Shadow fall in love with her because she's his exact opposite or 'reminds him of Maria'. Or oh! The hedgehog female Mary Sue that Sonic (and sometimes Shadow and Knuckles) happen to fall in love with! The lame ass recolored Sonic (canon characters not withstanding) OC hedgehog guy that comes out of fucking no where and is strangely, more awesome than everyone in existence. Or one of my other 'favorites': yet another damn half-ghost in the Danny Phantom universe that (if a guy) becomes Danny's rival or (if a girl) he falls in love with. And lets not forget the good ole 'Ryu has a child (usually girl) from a one night stand who later finds him and causes drama between him and (usually) Chun Li and has a thing for Mel' OC.
OC's are seriously becoming the bane of existence for all of fanfiction these days.
NO, your character is NOT that awesome. NO, your character isn't even 'original' because a few stories down, someone has a OC just like it. NO, we don't know or give a shit who the hell it is, so stop pretending like it's been in the canon story all along (with the way you write it) because unlike, we don't get it! And FUCK NO, they are not more important then the ACTUAL canon stars of the fiction you were writing about in the first place. Stop putting them in every damn scene or making the story about them! It's a fucking Powerpuff Girls fanfiction, I want to focus on the damn GIRLS, not some lame ass imitation that's 'original' because they're OMFG: a ROWDYRUFF Girl.
GRRRAAAA!
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Got a little ranty there. I'm sorry. ^^'
But seriously, your story sucks so much I kinda just went to that rant-like dark place.
Gonna go read a good PPG fanfiction now. Geez.
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September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I want to see where this goes.
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What no more chapters till you get 4 reveiews? how slow are reveiws anyway, and whats their to reveiw? you only have one chapter we cant reveiw that o good job you made a charater, give us somthing to sink our teeth into and reveiw im beggin ya
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Although it need a lot of work this could be a pretty good story, I'd be interested in reading more and I hope you will update. If the bad reviews have made you stop please try and ignore them, we all get them once in a while and you have more positive ones than negative!
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January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story write more please
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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aawww i cant wait for more !!
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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great proluge but need sex
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September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cool! I look forward to reading more of the story.