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It's fun to see (or in my case, read) Shego getting occasionally flustered and distracted by Kim.

The sparring was good. I can understand Shego getting very frustrated. Even though she's physically stronger and has incredible endurance, Kim's faster and more skilled. Sure, with her powers Shego could outlast Kim and eventually beat her, but it wouldn't feel as satisfying winning that way. This really is like how it was with Kim when she first fought Corscan, only now the roles have changed. I'll assume now that the two are going to be training together, Kim will help Shego with her techniques the way Corscan helped Kim with hers.

So, got to meet the staff. Like some of the other OC's you've come up with, they seem interesting.

Great chapter as always, Lord Kellendros. Looking forward to the next one! Keep up the good work.

I just wanted to stay first off I'm really enjoying this, you don't see many true erotic dramas around this place, so it's a welcome addition. the Kigo was pretty obvious but one thing I didn't really notice till I was rereading the story. First time through I was thinking this would be straight Kigo romance, but upon rereading I notice you have potential to bring Ron in to confuse our hero even farther.

It seemed especially in chap 25&26 Ron did the natural Ron freak out at finding out Kim was batting for the other team, but uppon reading exactly what he said, especially the "how am I going to compete with that?", shows he may have more than best friendly feelings for her. It's highly possible even he doesn't even realize his feelings, which added to Kim's new sexual preference would confuse her normally confused partner even more than normal.

That and the content code includes bi. And it would be fun to see Kim's reaction if someone brought it to her attention that Ron has feelings for her. But alas you are the authur so I will leave it to your more than capable hands. Keep up the great work and update soon!

well, first off, i must say, well done thus far.

you have an AMAZING story here....easily the best Kim Possible story I have read to date, and among the top 5 overall. You are quite descriptive, you write inner torment extremely well, your action scenes (be they fighting, dancing, or H-scenes) are obviously researched, and well mapped out. you give your original characters enough description that the reader can see them in their mind's eye, and when you write the scenes, it's not hard to be able to see THEM, as well.

One of the things I like most in slash and fem-slash stories is a little self-doubt about sexuality, something which, in Kim, you did perfectly.

The only thing I can suggest to make this story even better is get yourself a beta-reader, because you make the occasional spelling or grammar error.

Other than that, I itch to see the next chapter.

Fantastic story so far! I've been reading it whenever possible and have just finished everything you've written to this point and I can't wait to see where you take it from here!! Keep up the good work and update soon!

For chapter 44: Lol. Is Shego bringing a U-Haul to the second date? Great fic so far.

Now Wade's on the same page as Monique. As Shego said, went better than expected. BTW, good job working in how Wade knew about what had gone on between Kim and Corscan.

Got to learn a little more about Shego. Liked the way she turned it around and got Kim to divulge a bit. As she had pointed out, it has been pretty one-sided so far with the secrets.

As to Kim's little dirty secret-You know the one I mean-... Damn! Did not see that one coming at all!

The conversation that followed was good, once again showing how much thought Shego's put into how this relationship will go.

Man, I love when Mo goes all psychologist on us. She helps point out possible things about Shego that Kim would not have thought of.

To bring up a certain point in their conversation; it must be frustrating for Kim to be so close to Shego, yet having to wait to take that step with her. But it can't be anywhere near as frustrating as it is for me (and the other readers) to wait for the time when it actually happens. LK, I respect you wanting to keep us in suspense, but c'mon! =P

So, Drakken's Li'l Diablo scheme is underway. And for the most part, everything's going according to plan.

Another awesome chapter, LK! Looking forward to Kim and Shego's training together in the next chapter.

Just wanted to say this is one of the most well written stories ive read in a long time. And i love how you showed kims character mature more into her own person and you attention to detail is very good but i gotta say i do wish there was more going on between Shego and Kim.

It's understandable that a big place like that would need one hell of a security system, and Shego's got that in spades! I don't see why Kim is uncomfortable with this. After all, Corscan's facility was kind of the same thing, with armed security guards who shoot intruders on sight unless ordered otherwise.

Loved the kitchen scene! In her defense, Kim did warn Shego that letting her cook was not a good idea. And on a brigther side, other than a batch of ruined pizza dough, nothing in the kitchen-or any part of the kitchen itself-was destroyed in the process.

Okay, let me see if I've got everything straight.

Monique is the only one who knows all that has happened to Kim, including what's going on between Kim and Shego.

Ron and Rufus know about Corscan, but neither know about Shego. They're currently keeping secret their little visit to Corscan's facility.

Kim parents are completely in the dark about what's going on with their daughter.

The Tweebs know that their sister is gay, and that she is seeing Shego. Presumably, they don't know exactly what went on between Kim and Corscan. They apparently haven't let on that they know, and they haven't told anyone else.

Lynn Possible a.k.a. Nana, knows about Kim and Corscan's relationship, presumably doesn't know about Shego. She's currently keeping secret her past with Corscan.

Drakken - oblivious to everything outside his current evil scheme.

Wade, like Kim's parents, doesn't know what happened between Kim and Corscan, and, like Ron, doesn't know about Shego. He's presumably got something on the data he recovered. And now, Kim's fixing to tell him where she is, who she is with and why. Okay, chances are if she does tell him, it will lead to her having to explain her relationship with Corscan. The poor boy's going to have a nervous breakdown.

Am I right about the info above? Anyway, as always, terrific chapter. And, as always, looking forward to the next... especially looking forward to the next.

This was an excellent story up until when Kim went to Shego's house. Your ability of description is impressive but excessively annoying. Every recent chapter is Shego telling Kim off, Kim taking it mildly, and a new impossibly large room added to the house. You don't talk at all about the attraction between Shego and Kim. The story doesn't seem to be going anywhere especially since the mystery with Corscan has been forgotten. I really wish that the next chapter will have a lot less description of the house and more Kim and Shego exploring their attraction and more discussion on the mystery of Corscan.

Not much I can think to say, other than this was another great chapter.

Got to learn more about Shego and her past, which is always interesting. It just amazes me how much she's sharing with Kim, at least so soon. And Kim's doing well with controlling her reactions, not wanting to set the green woman off or push her away.

Okay, going off topic now; thanks for mentioning my deviantArt page. More fanart is one the way. I've just been getting sidetracked lately.

Again, great chapter. Looking forward to the next one.