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Poor Kim! To be sooo frustrated. She's going to be like an old baseball glove down there if she doesn't lay off for a bit.

I've decided to reread your novel to refresh my memory whilst waiting for the next chapter. Glad to see that josh84 is continuing to do illustrations for it.

You certainly got this one out quickly. At least, it seems that way to me.

You know, I had a feeling there was going to be further confrontation, but I didn't expect the way it was sparked: Motor Ed insulting Alice Cooper and his music in front of Shego, one of his biggest fans... that sound about right! ;)

Loved the transforming exo-frames. No doubts that was reference to Transformers, right?

Awesome fight. And it looks like Motor Ed and his goons won't be saying anything about it. He may be a moron most of the time, but even he's got the common sense to Shego and her threats.

I was a little surpised by the drug use at the end, especially by Kim, but given all of the other things the girl has done throughout the story, I got over the shock quickly.

Another terrific chapter! Keep it up!

good update! the fight scene was outstanding, and I was surprised by the drug use, but hey she's getting more and more openminded as the story goes on. but still no Kigo sex! stop holding out :p

also curious on how it's going to be when her best friend/sidekick finds out she's in a relationship with her (former?) arch foe. Keep it up! update soon!

Once again, you denied us the Kigo scene, but this works just fine.

It seems so out of place for Shego to get all giddy like a school girl. I didn't think she could get "giddy." But as it has been proven, time and time again, she's just full of surprises.

I was shocked by what Kim did to her hair, but that was soon forgotten when I found out what Shego had done to hers. My reaction was similar to Kim's; I liked Shego's hair, too, and to find out that she turned that long, thick, luxurious mane of hers into a foot-high Mohawk, it damn near broke my heart... until I found out it would grow back in about a week. Whew. What a relief.

Hair aside, loved the outfits they picked out. Rrrawrrrr!

It's only natural to lose yourself at a concert, so you can't blame Shego for doing the same. She was just unfortunate to have certain abilities that require her to maintain control. At least nothing was blown up.

Loved how Alice Cooper practically forced Shego onto the stage. And we got to learn a couple more things about the green woman - she had met Alice Cooper and she's a kick-ass guit-- excuse me, bass player!

Too bad all good things must come to an end. Kim and Shego couldn't just go home after a wonderful evening. No, they had to run into a bunch of dumbass bikers who wouldn't accept no for an answer. Thus a fight broke out. I almost feel sorry for the morons... almost, but not quite.

And yet another unexpected twist in the form of Motor Ed, the Lipsky Family Black Sheep, a.k.a. Drakken's mullet-headed, air guitar wailing cousin. Oh, this is going to prove interesting in the next chapter!

For one thing, I want to see how the greasers react, because I get the feeling that during the whole fight, none of them had any idea of who they were messing with. So, for them to find out that they picked a fight with two of the world's most dangerous females... ;)

Then there's Ed's reaction to seeing Kim and Shego together. On the one hand, I think the whole things going to be hilarious. On the other, this goes not bode well for our ladies should this information finds it's way back to Drakken.

Then again, I'm sure Kim and Shego will do what they can to keep such information from leaking out. Heh heh!

As always, a fantastic chapter, and as always, I'm looking forward to the next one.

Before I close, I'd like to comment on the foreword at the start of this chapter:

Congrats on reaching the half-million word mark! That is so awesome. Now, I can't speak for anyone else, but I am really glad that you have continued with this thing for as long as you have. One of things I hate most in the fanfic world is coming across great stories that are given up on and never completed. But from what you've said, I assume you plan to see this all the way to the end. For that, I am thankful.

Keep up the great work, Lord Kellendros!

Oh, that was a mighty fine chapter, Milord. What a concert, and what a battle! I don't mind if you go on with another 250K, with this kind of quality I'm not complaining a bit. Loved the description of the girl's outfits. The two of them together, a calliope, and they're a circus parade. I've never been to an Alice Cooper concert, or any kind of rock concert for that matter, but with your description I feel as if I'd been to one. I hope that Josh84 or somebody will do an illustration of the fight, that would be a something to see.

Hey there, I'm waiting patiently as ever. Still are there any updates coming soon?

great stuff as always, and judging by that last paragraph, are we going to finally get a Kigo love scene soon? also interested in how Ron'll handle this relationship. It was a touchy situation with Cas, a villian he wasn't that familiar with, but with Shego? Interested in how he'll take this one. Not to mention if her parents find out she's not only playing for the other team but seems to be going for known villians. Anycase, Keep up the excellent work and update soon!

How's Chapter 61 coming along?

That was a wicked cool chapter. i'm definitely looking forward to the next one.