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November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You, Kell, are a master. You definately turned the temp up on this chapter. Great work. I have nothing else to say but bravo. I hope to see the next chapter very soon.
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November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brilliantly done as always. However the length on 64 was not your usual. Beyond that I do not see where you were having trouble keeping in character. Brilliantly done and brilliantly executed. Looking forward to more!
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November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Missed this, I did. "Several chapters" eh? Including more action and story development, yes? Not that this isn't hot enough to sustain fusion, and the interplay between Kim and Shego isn't grabbing attention. As for the second part being a poor follower ... I'll believe THAT when I see it, and I suspect even if I am willing to acknowledge it's somewhat below your usual standard, it'll still be head-and-shoulders above anything a lot of other writers are using as their performance bar.
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November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My, but that WAS worth waiting for! Guess Josh won't be illustrating this chapter either.
One quibble, hands are manicured, feet are pedicured.
One quibble, hands are manicured, feet are pedicured.
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November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This... was worth... the wait!
Who is supposed to be the Bad Girl here? I gotta say, Kim's giving Shego a run for her money on that one in this chapter!
Before this chapter came out, I was imagining ways how Kim was going to "declare war" on Shego, though I gotta tell ya, Kim walking past Shego, wearing nothing but a smile on her face and towel wrapped around her neck, didn't came to mind. I didn't expect that, especially not that soon. But it did have an effect on the pale-skinned woman, which brings up the next topic on my list:
Kim has finally gotten a taste of Shego - literally! What Kim did was surprising, arousing, and hysterical!
The second half was excellent, too. That Kim is such a tease! Maybe that's because YOU are such a tease as well, ending the chapter like this!
On the upside, you did mention that you have done several chapters after this one, and will post them on a fixed schedule. Needless to say, I'm looking forward to them.
BTW, Thanks for mentioning my artwork at the start. Truthfully, I haven't gotten anything new done for several months. But, now that you mentioned me, I guess I'll need to step it up and get more pics done ASAP!
Outstanding chapter, LK!
Who is supposed to be the Bad Girl here? I gotta say, Kim's giving Shego a run for her money on that one in this chapter!
Before this chapter came out, I was imagining ways how Kim was going to "declare war" on Shego, though I gotta tell ya, Kim walking past Shego, wearing nothing but a smile on her face and towel wrapped around her neck, didn't came to mind. I didn't expect that, especially not that soon. But it did have an effect on the pale-skinned woman, which brings up the next topic on my list:
Kim has finally gotten a taste of Shego - literally! What Kim did was surprising, arousing, and hysterical!
The second half was excellent, too. That Kim is such a tease! Maybe that's because YOU are such a tease as well, ending the chapter like this!
On the upside, you did mention that you have done several chapters after this one, and will post them on a fixed schedule. Needless to say, I'm looking forward to them.
BTW, Thanks for mentioning my artwork at the start. Truthfully, I haven't gotten anything new done for several months. But, now that you mentioned me, I guess I'll need to step it up and get more pics done ASAP!
Outstanding chapter, LK!
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November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story man. Love the way you keep beating around the bush(no pun intended). One of the few stories that I keep coming back to over and over again. It's the longest and quiet possibly the best story on this site. Just one problem. WHERE ARE THE NEW CHAPTERS LOL!! I can't wait for you to post some new chapters. Until then, I'll just keep enjoying the ones you've posted.
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November 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, first of all I have to say it, you are a frikken genius, the depth and scope of this story are beyond what many would consider a best seller. And more then 500k! that bigger than Many of the Books that I normally read. If you could ever find a way you need to get this thing printed and made into a book.
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November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
plz write more im begging you write more
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September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sooo what happened with this story, was one of my favorites on AFF
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April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hot... Hot... HOT!!!
Oh, this chapter's content now places first at the top of my list, right in front of Kim and Shego's "Dirty Dancing" scene! :D
So, with the exception of the first section, the rest of this chapter was a flashback, right? Based on the info from chapters 60 and 61, the present date is July 28; so the events that occured in this chapter took place between July 20 and 22. Is that about right?
Back in chapter 60 based on what was learned from Kim's journal entries, I thought that Kim and Shego's light kissing and more physical contact was as far as they have gotten. Boy, was I wrong! Thanks to this chapter, I now know that they've gotten as far as deep kissing-or as Shego put it, "mouth-fucking" (LOL)-and some serious heavy petting. In fact, we've finally gotten around to where they are exposing a little more skin... well, Kim's skin at least; Shego's got to see and touch the girls goods, but she's still holding out. Man, I can't wait to see (or read) Kim's reaction when they're both buck naked and she get's the full view of Shego's body.
On a side note, I like the change in roles. Near the beginning, Corscan was the expert and was teaching Kim a few tricks. Now, Kim's teaching Shego a few of the things she has learned. I can only imagine how it's going to be when they finally get down to business, if you know what I mean. ;)
It seems that Kim's urges are getting out of control. I mean, she was just about ready to jump Nereza, and she practically had to force herself from doing so. Heck, she's keeping tabs on how many days since she last had sex with somebody. That is both impressive and disturbing. Well, I guess it doesn't help the fact that she's been continually denied a piece of that ivory woman she's living with. :p
Speaking of which... What. Is. Shego's. Deal?! She has no problem pleasuring herself while, in her mind's eye, Kim is the one pleasuring her. Yet the real thing is living with her, not thirty feet away in the next room, and they both obviously want each other, but the only thing stopping them is Shego's "problem!" Why? Why?! WHY?!
So, Kim's decided to try a different approach and make Shego come to her; but will her plan work? Based on the present timeline, she has supposedly already initiated said plan, but is it actually working? I guess we'll have to wait and see.
One more thing I want to bring up before I close, LK. I know we readers are all anxious about Kim and Shego's... [ahem] first fuck, but what plans have you made for their first fight? I know in the past the two have had heated arguments, but none of them really qualified. And Shego said in chapter 41, "...but trust me, when we have our first fight, you’ll know it.” And knowing you, there will be one, and it will involve punching and kicking and blood and probably a couple broken bones between these two ladies, AND it will make all this stories previous fights pale in comparison.
Then again, if you choose not to, I can live with that. :)
Fantastic chapter, LK. Looking forward to the next one.
Oh, this chapter's content now places first at the top of my list, right in front of Kim and Shego's "Dirty Dancing" scene! :D
So, with the exception of the first section, the rest of this chapter was a flashback, right? Based on the info from chapters 60 and 61, the present date is July 28; so the events that occured in this chapter took place between July 20 and 22. Is that about right?
Back in chapter 60 based on what was learned from Kim's journal entries, I thought that Kim and Shego's light kissing and more physical contact was as far as they have gotten. Boy, was I wrong! Thanks to this chapter, I now know that they've gotten as far as deep kissing-or as Shego put it, "mouth-fucking" (LOL)-and some serious heavy petting. In fact, we've finally gotten around to where they are exposing a little more skin... well, Kim's skin at least; Shego's got to see and touch the girls goods, but she's still holding out. Man, I can't wait to see (or read) Kim's reaction when they're both buck naked and she get's the full view of Shego's body.
On a side note, I like the change in roles. Near the beginning, Corscan was the expert and was teaching Kim a few tricks. Now, Kim's teaching Shego a few of the things she has learned. I can only imagine how it's going to be when they finally get down to business, if you know what I mean. ;)
It seems that Kim's urges are getting out of control. I mean, she was just about ready to jump Nereza, and she practically had to force herself from doing so. Heck, she's keeping tabs on how many days since she last had sex with somebody. That is both impressive and disturbing. Well, I guess it doesn't help the fact that she's been continually denied a piece of that ivory woman she's living with. :p
Speaking of which... What. Is. Shego's. Deal?! She has no problem pleasuring herself while, in her mind's eye, Kim is the one pleasuring her. Yet the real thing is living with her, not thirty feet away in the next room, and they both obviously want each other, but the only thing stopping them is Shego's "problem!" Why? Why?! WHY?!
So, Kim's decided to try a different approach and make Shego come to her; but will her plan work? Based on the present timeline, she has supposedly already initiated said plan, but is it actually working? I guess we'll have to wait and see.
One more thing I want to bring up before I close, LK. I know we readers are all anxious about Kim and Shego's... [ahem] first fuck, but what plans have you made for their first fight? I know in the past the two have had heated arguments, but none of them really qualified. And Shego said in chapter 41, "...but trust me, when we have our first fight, you’ll know it.” And knowing you, there will be one, and it will involve punching and kicking and blood and probably a couple broken bones between these two ladies, AND it will make all this stories previous fights pale in comparison.
Then again, if you choose not to, I can live with that. :)
Fantastic chapter, LK. Looking forward to the next one.