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Wooy. GJ's using explosive bullets now? Definitely not cricket.

not quite what I was expecting but still some good character development and another cliffhanger.

I'm still biting at the bit wanting to know how many gaskets Ron blows when he finds out Kim's moved from one villian to another.

on top of that now I gotta know how they get out of this one. Keep it up and update soon!

[Screams] I should have seen that coming! You did the same thing before with Alice Cooper concert; Shego and Kim have a fun evening of Rock and Roll, only for it to end with them having to fight Motor Ed and his bikers! But more about that later.

From the beginning - the bathroom scene... ah, no, on second thought, not even going to touch that one. :p

On the balcony, Kim confessed that she's missing Corscan, which is understandable. The sex aside, Corscan did teach Kim many things to help her become the girl she is now, making the woman an important person in Kim's life. And Shego was actually understanding about the whole thing. Finished off with an affectionate hug... a touching moment.

I also found Kim's little speech somewhat touching. She had a chance to blow off some sexual steam with an old "friend", and yet she refused because she is determined to first work things out between her and Shego.

I don't see why Kim got so defensive about the hot bathroom sex thing. After all, she's been open with Shego about things that are a little more... intense?... so HBS doesn't seem like much. [Sighs] Yet, it was enough for Kim to "punish" Shego for pushing it.

All in all, Shego actually enjoyed her punishment, to a degree. I sure as hell did! :D

But alas, once again all good things come to an end. And now the bad ones begin. Shego getting into a fight with Global Justice agents, getting shot - though it definitely could have been worse had Kim not jumped in. Then, the agent turns the gun on Kim, with the intent of putting one right between her eyes, and Shego firing off a couple green energy blasts at the man. And finally... CLIFFHANGER!!!

Well, despite the nasty turn of events, I'm not too worried. I'm betting that Shego's energy bolts will reach the agent before he pulls the trigger. And I also get the feeling that, given the circumstances, his fate will be not be as fortunate as his comrades.

Great chapter, Lord Kellenros! Awaiting the next one!

okay, that is, damn. Seriously, this downright sucks! Still, need to read more, update again soon, ja ne,.

awe, I saw you updated and I was hoping to see the [nuclear] fall out of Kim's confession to Ron... not that this wasn't great. Was actually curious on what Ms. C's been up to while Kim's been seducing the lovely Ms. Hothands.

regardless, good stuff, keep up the excellent work!

Hmm ... is Kim the object of the experiment, or another component of it?

Dahaamn!

After an absence of 38 chapters since Interlude the First - Past Imperfect, we finally get to peek in on our favorite mystery woman, Corscan Mataii - the one woman army! After brief visit with Miss Jolie (very nice), she gets down business... and business is good!

I mean, seriously, she was like a cross between Batman and Predator there! And armed with the best toys! What was thing she used, a minature man-made black hole or something? And that bola - that's something I could imagine a Predator actually using!

This woman is still an utter mystery. Just what are Corscan's motives? What has she got going on behind the scenes? These, of course, are rhetorical questions. I know it'll all be revealed near the very end, but that doesn't make it easier to wait!

Incredible interlude chapter, LK! Definitely reminds us that there's more going on than just the inevitable KIGO sex.

Keep it up!

Well, look who's back! That was a surprise, looks like Corscan was really holding back after all when she fought with Kim.

I think I've suffered second degree burns from this chapter. The first half - which may not be your best work, but still pretty damn good - was HOT, and the second was even HOTTER! And that is, to my knowledge, the closest that Kim and Shego have ever gotten to getting off together!

Okay, just to clarify; based on what I've read, the last chapter and the massage scene from this one were flashbacks, and everything from that point to the end is now back in the present, right?

From the way they were talking, it sounds like Monique knows about Shego's problem?

So, Kim's finally going to tell Ron about everything that's been going on with Shego? Based on the way he reacted when she told him about Corscan, I cannot imagine this going any better. But I guess we'll have to wait and see.

Great chapter, LK!

Hot times with Kim and Shego for sure...

and here comes the trainwreck I've been expecting. Here's to hoping it isn't as bad as I'm thinking...