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for Revelations of Destiny

by Kellendros

person Anon
schedule April 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting group of agents Betty's working with.

Curious about Agent Gallows' missing AV rig. Kim and Shego were too busy tending to the pale-skinned woman's wounds to even notice the rig, let alone take or destroy it. Something else is going on here, that's for sure.

Going a little off topic, I know there was no mention of her here, but does GJ not know of Corscan or Kim's involvement with the woman over the past few months? I would figure that they had at least some knowledge about that.

Anyway, things are definitely getting heavy.

Terrific chapter! Awaiting the next one with anticipation.
person michael
schedule April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. I read this over the course of 2 days and I am really hooked. Good character development and plot and general all around naughtiness. Cant wait to read more
person Tomo
schedule March 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't tell you how excited I was to see that this story had updated. It is easily one of my favourite fanfictions. I'm looking forward to see what you do next!
person Anon
schedule March 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome.

AWESOME.

THIS CHAPTER IS FUCKING --yes, pun intended :P-- AWSOME!!!

Now, I catch the double meaning of the title. Meaning One - This event has been, indeed, a long time coming. We, your faithful readers, have been waiting for this moment since C-33; 36 chapters building. And, for me, it has been well. Worth. The. Wait! :D

And Meaning Two... well, there's no need to really elaborate. It just took the ladies a long, looonnng time! ;) Again, worth the wait.

And the "69" pun... I got it... at the very end... after you explained it. :P

Fantastic chapter, LK! Looking forward to the next one.

Thank you so much for the KIGO!
person skoshi4
schedule March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sooo the girls FINALLY did it. You made Kim's little romp with Corscan look positively restrained.
person classic cowboy
schedule March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I know I've told you before, but I have to say that I am a huge fan of K/R, that's usually what I write and what I read. I very seldom read anything Kigo.

BUT

all I can say to this particular chapter. two simple, simple words...
Holy. Shit.

that was awesome.
schedule February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok i've read this damn thing like 7 times and i still love it i just can't wait for more its a great Fic and among My top 10 Fics on this site its still Number one in the KP section by far PLZZZZZ!!!!! write more
schedule December 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I haven't finished it yet, but... wow.
In three words, damn, bloody, brilliant.
I can't write more, cuz I haven't even caught up yet. But I didn't want to wait.
This is the kind of story I hope to one day write.
person graypheonix
schedule December 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, I do like the idea for Sheego's regeneration, it works like a massively accelerated metabolism, though it's not perfect either, so a good doctor is needed for any patch-ups. In spite of that, it seems to work, and it's a fairly decent concept. Hell, I feel like I want to steal it myself.

Otherwise, it's a little awkward, but that comes from pushing through a chapter so fast (and short) but it doesn't matter if it gets the point across. All this chapter was for was just transition and showing a few vital points, compressed as much as possible. So, not half bad.

Still, continue to update, will ya? Definitely look forward to the next update, maybe 2 updates before the new year, but I doubt it will be that much. Otherwise, kickass. Update again soon, will ya? Ja ne.
person Anon
schedule December 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Now that's a revelation: Shego, despite the impossible odds, is falling in love with Kim. I half-expected to happen. This will definitely make things more interesting.

Talk about an ordeal. Both Kim and Shego were able to make it back to the hotel, and though it's not 100% certain, it looks like Shego may pull through without a trip to the hospital. Her powers never cease to amaze.

Meanwhile, the GJ agents are probably going to start searching Paris for Shego. And if the agent that got his arm blown off survived, that will make matters worse, as he's seen Kim Possible's face.

And for now, it looks like telling Ron her secret is now fallen to the bottom of Kim's list for now, her main focus on Shego's health.

Good chapter, LK.