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for Revelations of Destiny

by Kellendros

schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well she didn't freakout as bad as i thought she would. Corscan is a very interesting character and i can't help but think hidden agendas galore behind her mind. any way knowing that Kim will do it becasue she couldn't live with her self for back out of anyhing ican't wait to se her own suprize when she starts getting into to. more in a self descovery way than any thing. post soon later
person battlestar
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That will hit you right between the eyes make no mistake.
person mouserr
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
superb fighting all the way around ... loved the way a few light hearted moments were interspersed with the very serious nature of the fight ... both got what they were expecting and more ... for a moment we get a small glimpse of the true potential of Kim and its hard not to be impressed considering what she is up against ... then came the fall and it was as brutal as it was eye opening

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person battlestar
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That sound you hear is my jaw going thought the floor. Good chapter, I will defenitlyhave to read it agine, I'm sure i missed something.
person Cyraxr
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ouch that sound painful but very good. Please update soon. Signed a fan of Shego.
person Bianca
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes we are patient when it comes to updates, and at times as you know we will not always give feedback to a story. But love the update and whenever you decide to post more, i'll be waiting. But i will not be reviewing every chapter.. just to let you know. I'm out.
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
bored at the lack of updates over the weekend and pushingof my own writing i wandered over here because i noticed you updated over here first. I like the chapter and impressed with the way you described the whole fight between the two so far. Any way a wuestion i've been meaningto ask do you study a few forms of martial arts or just reseach really well. any way i hope more review becasue i want to keep reading this story later
person Cyraxr
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was fun to read I could almost see fight. Please update soon. Signed a fan of Shego.
person Cyraxr
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow a wonderful display of athletic prowess for both of them. Please update soon. Signed a fan of Shego.
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I find this a very interesting story so far and I look forward to the fightscene that no doubt will come in one the following chapters.