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The nerd says an excellent chapter all around. Now to the questions, Drakken escaping from prision with a Shego-esqe level of competintcy? WTF! Is he a plant, a fake villian sent in to train Kim, or am I talking/thinking out of my ass? And nice touch with Jounior talking for hair care products, le goop anyone I know, if I remember a refrence mentioned afew times in one episode, I'm a nerd. And lockin' the bedroom door, gonna have to if you're gonna wake up "moist" and you want to avoid unpleasent and awkward conversations. The part about Corscan anticipating her needs (food, water and what not), well I'd say seems like a setup, but then we already know that, but damn it a set up to what, besides the obvious HLS. Any clues Lord K? And now she fells no anger or outrage while thinking about the "setup" (the fight) and a small part of her admits that she likes Corscan (progress) but the larger part want to slap her silly, very well done. Major DENIAL, at least untill the end of the chapter. The dream and her overactive imagination, with a mention of Shego in there, nice. And although Kim did't get alot of sleep it seems as if her lethargy is more due to the lack of 'food', or is it the water or lack there of? Don't let them steal her bodily fluids! And not telling Mo or Ron, ok she eventually tells Mo but what happens when Ron finds out and about how long she kept it from him? Hope he's understanding. But what I'm waiting for is the 'super breakdown', not just the single tear before she goes to sleep after waking up with her hand in her pants, or 'nearly' crying in the locker room showers, I'm talking about a throwing things through windows scream a thon. And I think it's gonna happen after Corscan has her 'day' with Kim. And why doesn't Kim picture Monique in her 'dream ladies' montage? Oooo, and nice touch with the Mrs Dr P not home cause at work thing, and isn't Kim just a great daughter? And why did she owe the tweebs one? Using the internet and what I presume is most likely a check list to see if shes gay? So Kim!

Lord Kellendros, please please oh for their protection of our bodily fluids, release the nex chapter soon, like Thursday soon. Please. Also, story rules, you rock, keep it up. YEAH! Peace Out.

i just recently discovered this story and i was pleasently suprised by it. i am not quite sure where you are going with this story but so far i have enjoyed the build up. it has a certain level of believablity to it the i think gives it an extra oomph. can't wait to see the "date' that kim has coming up.

Hmm interesting how did Drakken get himself out of jail? Update soon please. Signed a fan of Shego.

Hey, I'm glad I decided to follow this. Shego will show up soon, I'm guessing. Can't wait. Keep up the good work/.

first thing first the alert worked. now on to the mess that is Kim possible.i see that one little kiss opened pandoras box. i wonder how long until she starts forgeting where she is when she admires the beauty of other woman around her. and on that note i alwasys thoguht gays were blessed and cursed they can have shower time with the objects of their desires and i can't oh well. Also I wonder how long till Kim relises that it was her slight adrenaline rushes that never let her realise she liked woman alot longer than just recently. the subconsious a beautiful thing. moving on the crate of water caused a great reaction. what else oh i know it has to be said. it good to see that denial is not just a river in egypt but also a small stream in Kim possibles head.She should listen to her own motto better she can do anything even be a lesbian. well thats my ramblign and two cents post soon alter.

springing leaks in more ways than 1 going off the start of the chapter ... nagging thoughts get to her all day driving her batty then what does she find at home? something else to send her loopy ... loving the way you've portrayed the family life at Casa Possible so far ... nice details on how the household functions and the more realistic portrayal of Mrs. P is a great touch

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Wow another wonderful chapter in the books. Signed a fan of Shego.

A day in the life a teen heroine who is questioning sexuality. Well handled. Nice to see how her mind works. Are you goig to be referenciing specific episodes of the show?

Ahhh, Kim is awakening to a whole new world of possiblities. Heh heh, sorry, I couldn't help my self! I hope we soon get to see how Kim handels accepting that she likes the ladies and I do wonder what her fear (as shown by the "instant turnoff" {IMO} when she pictured Corscan while "showering") is based on; fear of being any more 'different' than she already is, or a subconsious fear of what her parents or friends would think? I hope we find out soon! And Kims anger at Corscans 'presumption', it makes me ponnder at what Kims going to say when she finnaly admits how she feels, "how could I not see it?". Oh and the shower scene, awesome, truly awesome, kinda makes you wonder why Kims so blind. And Drakken escaping on his own, (insert dramatic sound effect here), a future plot thread me thinks, or is this just me looking for things that arn't there, again? And the WATER, oh the water, are those Russians trying to steal our preciuos bodily fluids? Or is it just Corscan? Now, as always, this chapter ROCKS! I hope we (your fans) get the next one soon, please. And as always Lord Kellendros, continue to entertain and delight us with your words of wonder! LATER GATOR!

and now for the mindfuck ... Kim knows what Corscan wants and while her body and a quiet serene part of her brain knows and is in agreement the rest of her is mighty pissed ... doubtful itll get any better over the course of the next few days as its likely to fester and annoy the hell outta her till she snaps one way or the other ... internal debate over honoring her word or breaking the deal because its unsavory, in her opinion, i would recommend if at all possible stay the hell outta her way until its settled or she might break you

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