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Donair, huh? Had to look that up.

Shego doesn't need a suppository while she has Kim!

Are you white?

Hey! I left you a review a long time ago, and I just wanted to say I still think about the story often. You really did a great job giving the characters life and crafting places around them, the actions between them... it was really great. I know you told me before it would be a long time before you got back to the story,and I understand. I just want you to know I'm watching out for the new chapter, okay? Not, like, every day. Don't worry about that. But I'm not forgetting to check. I hope life and time in general allows you to update again someday. Thank you very much for what you have written so far. :)

Let me just add yet another cry for continuation to the chorus. This is an epic folk would really like to see through to completion.

A tale grand, long, and long in wait for an update! This best describes this story so far. Of the chapters so far, you've told a ton of backstory, of personal foibles and issues, and frankly it's been a huge blast so far. Only two downsides, where the world shifted to have superscience and martial arts (something Corscan is probably the result of, genetic experiment from before WW1 perhaps?) and the second, is the LOOOOOONG time between updates. I'll admit, it is hard to keep writing a story when the source material it's based on has dried up for over a year (doubly so here, it's hard to design the tale you want to tell). But even then, this IS a story worth telling, and well worth the read so far, and especially in the future. I figure in the last few months Real Life mighta hit you hard, and finding time to just edit the last few chapters before 69, and then 70, must have taken a lot of time and effort. On the other hand, no updates, emails to the people who subscribe to your story updates? Kinda disheartening. Still, it's been a fun read, and one I personally looking forward to seeing more of. Update soon (or when you get a chance) ja ne.

Although thinking about how a meeting could go, well, would Dr. Director wake them up with a talk herself, or a team of commandos who jump the gun in her best interests? Admittedly, the both of them (sheego and Kim) are wiped emotional and physically (both from the healing emotionally and physically till then, and of course, the 69th chapter, heh). Still, where are you taking the story from here, and in what direction will it follow from there, a secretive affair from the prying eyes of the world, of fugitives, or of confronting one's past, and trying to build a REAL future? All this questions and more, I hope to see in the next update. Update again soon, ja ne.

I know this isn't much of a review, but PLEASE UPDATE!!! I read the story so far over the course of a few days and it's sooo good! It'd be such a shame to just... quit! I know you probably have a ton going on in your life, but you've put so much work into this story? Why just leave everyone hangin'? I hate that about fanfiction sometimes. I'll find a great story by a talented author, and then they'll just stop half-way, like it never mattered and screw the fans. Sigh. PLEASE UPDATE DUDE. YOU ARE SOOO GOOD AND THIS STORY IS SOOOOO GREAT!!!

The last chapter was good. I was wondering if Kim was going to get caught up in GJ chasing down Shego. Although I didn't think that she would be one of wanted ones. Well written and good story continuation. Need more though.

first of all, i wish to compliment you on this magnificient story, which i believe is perhaps the most detailed kigo story out there, and ranks amongst my top 5 favorite kigo stories, if its not at the top already. the writing and plot are imaginative, thorough and if i dare say so, professional. If you could get your hands on the copyrights, you could probably, and i believe quite easily, put this out as a litterary re-imagining of the end of the third season of the Kim possible series, leading into the fourth.

I also wish to know if you will be continuing this story on AFF.com, or if it'll be exclusively on your yahoo groups account? if its the later, i would like to join your group so that i might have access to the story and continue reading it. Mind you i haven't a clue how Yahoo groups operates in the regards of finding your story on it, so an indication would be most welcome.

Thank you again for this marvelous peice of litterature and i do hope you will be continuing it,

Psyraptor