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Trippy as usual. Very nice. Now we're rollin'.

Sometimes I feel frustrated with you. You have so many chapters done to this, and your posting them at too slow of a pace for me. I want to read more, and I know you have it, ready to be posted. Grr... I'm impatient.

cool chapter. it made Corscan more of a likable person, but you can tell that she might sell you for abusiness deal. I woried for Kim she is gettign sucked in can see it and can almost offer no resistance to the the whole thing. i can't wait to see how her attitude slowly starts to change. any way post soon later

This was a good nice chapter, with good interaction between Kim and Corscan.

Its very rare for me to find a story that has me so egerly awaiting an update like this. The only other that was done this are Hobnob-rev with MBS, Rann and his Dark Ocean, and David Webers Honor Harrington novel series. It nice to see I can reconies charcter growth and enjoy it.

More please and soon.

Ahh, you kept the location a secret and now we(the readers) have to wait until next time! Shame on you! ;) Still, it was another great chapter. Happily awaiting the next!

this is really good!!!!!!!

Every once in a while there comes along a story so great here on adultfanfiction that it by itself is a reason to still "hang out" here. Now i already had one such story, Dark Ocean, and then you show up with RoD, and give me a second reason. Dear god but this is a wonderfully captivating story. I realy hope you have enough material to at least make this story through (Even now hoping for a sequel, but i´ll keep that hope in realistic chains. :) ) because if this story just stops in the middle and dies, i will probably cry a little.

Standing ovations

F3

Man, this story has been intense so far. You really did a good job with the fight between Kim and Corscan (How do you pronounce her name anyway?). You were very decriptive with all the fight scenes. I could literally see it happening in my mind as I read it. And all the chapters and everything in them have been very detailed.

So, now Kim has agreed to Corscan's terms. I'm definitely awaiting more. I want to know how this will turn out. Keep up the good work.

Ahhh, an excellent chapter Lord Kellendros, the nerd likes. Now onto the questions, the coments, the 'good stuff"-
-Kims identity struggle, does she like the boys, history would indicate that she only like the pretty boy type, like Mankey (which is one letter away from monkey!), and Hirotaka, but wouldn't Hirotakas' ninja sense and 'gaydar' have picked up on Kims lesbian vibe?
-Kim not wanting to sleep with Shego, YEAH RIGHT!!
-Nice touch with the fantacy scene with Corscan and the rest of the cheer squad, but if that didn't turn her off, then why didn't she try and picture, Josh (monkey!) or Hirotaka, with her, ya know? Why only the HLS and none of what she thought she was all about? Is she subconsiously trying to not prove that shes gay, like if she is grossed out by the man style lovin' that would be pretty conclusive evidence that shes all about the HLS, so why?
-Kims mom sleeps in her office instead of a loving home. REALLY?
-(About Kims mom) Messy hair, eyes looking strained, smells of booze. Her patient had better have died or she has some 'splanin ta do! So Lord K, whats going on with Kimmies mom? And why didn't Kim bring up the boozy smell, you would think Mr & Mrs Dr P would be all about the 'don't drink and drive' lecture, practice what you preach mom!
-(Your words)Too tense to go to bed yet. Interesting. YEAH RIGHT! Again, her patient had better have died otherwise it sounds like there is trouble in paradise, so. That acurate or am I just looking into things to much or is it something more, sinister?
-Mrs Dr P opinion is that Kim is unusually energetic, very athletic unusual, or supernaturaly unusual?
-When Kims playing 'What If' with her mom, the way Ann says hamburger is weird. Is it just because she knows Kim isn't telling her everything or that she 'know', ya know? And does she know that Kims friend is in fact Kim?
-And I'm having difficulty waiting to see what happens when Kim tells her mom and dad, how long are we (or more importantly, me) going to have to wait to read about that one?
-Kim defending Corscan to her mom (even though her mom doesn't know), interesting, another tick in the 'Kim likes Corscan' column, if only Kim saw it that way she might not have to go through a breakdown (I'm assuming that Kims mega meltdown comes after the sex!) and just admit it and get on with the HLS. Yeah Bay be!
-Anns' comment about it being mean spirited is pretty much correct, in fact I'm surprised Kim didn't try to get out of the bet on the grounds that 'if she had sex with Corscan it "could" hurt her emotionally'. Any comment on that Lord Kellendros?
-'Sticky between the legs, crusty residue on the inside crotch of her pj's' Just wake up and smell the pride parade already, Darling!!!
-Oh and why didn't Kim hear the phone ring when Corscan called? Is Ann is on the conspiracy? Or am I just looking to deep into things, like that time with the water and the theft of Kims bodily fluids, again?
-'What can I do for you?' And Corscan didn't jump right on top of that, WTF!!!! Is she a master manipulator or again, am I looking to deep into things?
-Kim agreed pretty damn quick, yes I understand that she just HAS to know, BUT, it could hurt her, she could have a mega meltdown, I guess that she doesn't subscribe to that saying 'ignorance is bliss'. Oh well, should be good to read.
-And one final set of questions; the dreams Kims been having, normal erotic dreams brought on by a realization or is some 'external' (Read: Corscan or, maybe, just maybe, Kims mom. I think maybe her mom cause of the 'late nights' (hospital my ass) and cause the water told me too) source helping them along?

Now that the questions are out of the way, please Lord Kellendros, please release the next few chapters soon, and why you ask, well cause my review rocked and, well, so does your story, to the umpteenth degree! Continue rocking on. Peace!

okay hamburgers equal sex. powerful comparsion you have going there. lol. any way Seeing kim struggle with the whole thing has been fun. i wonder just how much her mother is worring about her after that conversation. And finally curiosity will always have two outcomes kill you or make you wiser. Lets see how much wiser kim gets after this bout. post soon later