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por kim is adrenaline junkie tht will never be satisfied. and to be honest i'm not sure if i would ever want to se what her foreplay develops into after she gets a clue to things. any way good to see they haven't lost thier competanes and i the bedroom scene is goin to be hilarious as they try to up each other. any way post soon later

Wow that was fun to read. Please update soon. Signed a fan of Shego. "note to self chapter 13"

Ah, I love how I thought chapter 14
was going to be hot lesbian sex
and then it wasn't. NICE.

for a pair of adventure minded types thats probly the perfect 'date' there .. covers a great range of extreme sports that Kim loves and inna setting thats nothing less than spectacular ... im an avid cyclist tho i prefer touring over the grueling cross country in this i have done a bit of it and man ... loved it

bout the only thing id balk at is the BASE and thats mostly cause i dont trust a chute i didnt pack myself

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You know, I had a feeling it was going to be in Hawaii. Truly paradise. Once again, another exciting chapter. I was sweating just reading the ordeal the two ladies went through. Can't wait to see what's next on the agenda - though I guess I'll have to. Still, looking forward to it.

Another birlliant chapter. I liked the whole race. I doubt I could ever do that. very sweet

Awesome update. The interaction between Kim and Corscan just keeps getting better.

Ahh, an excellent chapter with a most evil cliffhanger, why do you torment us so? Really, we're good to you, so why? But still, wickedly cool chapter. I like the start were Corscan once again either shows that she really likes Kim and wants to make this easier for her or is a really really good manipulator. Any clue as to which on it is? And yes Kims mom is right, Mr Dr P cannot stay mad at the 'tweebs, wonder why that is? Are they too involved in the conspiracy that is the manipulation of Kim? World saving things she needs to take care of. Hmm, who ever heard of HLS as a 'world saving thing' earth shattering, maybe. No fucking more twenty-four hour straight? Man, I guess I can live with that. And doesn't Corscan sound so 'reasonable' when reenforcing the idea that Kim owes her. I like that part. Kims random thoughts drifted to bondage, yeah, it's always the quiet redheads, but hey, at least shes not a librarian too. And when Kim spends that much time with Ron, cause if I recall your timeline correctly, that was when he started liking Kim, whats he gonna think when she just cuts him off to do her 'internship' thing? I really can't wait to read more about that, and about his reaction when she tells him about her orientation. Any clue as to when that's gonna happen? You look nice today. Yeah, Kim, thats the nerves about boinking Corscan talking, not your latent attraction to her, same thing with the flirty remarks during the meal to. And she needs to know her sexual preferance so bad shes willing to make what could be a HUGE mistake, alright, this is Kim Possible were reading about, if shes gonna screw up its gonna be big. Mr Forst and Ms Hui are the pilots, and Corscan doesn't go anywhere without at least one of them, hmmmm. Are they her attendants, is she part of some long lost mythical royal dynasty, cause I doubt she needs a bodyguard or that she really super codependant. Any clue as to what thats about? A private jet capable of going Mach 3, where can I get one?!?! Awesomeness!!!! And is it just me or is Corscan trying to impress upon Kim the need to be carefull to the point of paranoia, I mean I know that safety when engaging in sex is important, but it seems like shes trying to make Kim become ultra suspicious; the part about not trusting people at face value. Of course it could be taken that Corscan is in fact a time traveller and wants Kim to always know if her partners are clean because she contracted an STD in the future and died. It could be possible, any clue there as to which one it could be, yes no maybe so? The table manners of a starving wolf, could be worse, she might not even know how to sit down to eat a seven course meal with the queen with manners included, but it does seem like thats another thing that Kim and Corscan have in common, aside from being women of course. And the water, oh the water, is Corscan still trying to steal Kims bodily fluids, or just wanting to get her hooked on her 'special' water, hmmm? Kim opening up to Corscan and eventually responding to innuendo ladden comments with flirty remarks of her own, interesting, is Corscan good or what? AND I think that they either landed in Hawaii, for a nice walk (read gruelling endurance trek knowing those two) around before dinner at Corscans private residence there, or at some desolate island that they have to fight there way through to get to the food, kinda like a super survival course, before dinner and then ritualistic druidic sex under the stars and a full moon. Can't wait to find out which so please don't keep us waiting too long Lord K, pleae.
Continue rocking on with the story, it rules, as do you. See ya'!

as will said in independence day 'i have got to get me one of these!' that jet sounds sweet ... with all the fancy gadgets within those engines have to be pretty hard core ... just like the owner

and here they are, where? not clear yet but things should start moving pretty quick from this point to the 'finale' Kim is still fighting herself over the decision but the curious side has staked it's claim, heck it's gaining ground if that conversation is any indicator

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Another wonderful look in the life and mind of Kim.