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We love this story!!!!

Excellent work Lord K. This is truly , the mosst erotic K.P. fanfic, that I've ever read.

What a glorious chapter, it made me laugh the laugh of a thousand feathers. The nerd proclaims this chapter awesome in the extreame. A Booyaa! The banter, very well done Lord K, very well done. Kim the curious kitten, very accurate. I liked the extreame sports touch, the biking and the low altitude base jumping, and the mountain climbing, and especialy the motorcycle riding. Oh yeah, Kim likes power between her legs huhh? Interesting. And it does make me wonder if Corscan kinda let Kim win in the little race they had, ya know? When they had to climb the mountain/hill, why would Corscan chose the longest way up, hmmm? Kim really seemed to push herself hard, ahhh, that redheaded competitive spirit, thats gotta be it. ANd Corscan although breathing heavily didn't seem all that worn out when compared to Kim, wonder why? Any clue Lord K? Eager, so Corscan like eager and Kim is, eager. Interesting, and what about that 'very potent, primal hunger' look in Corscans green hued (WTF green, what is she, when will we find out Lord K, please alittle hint, please?) hazel eyes, and Kim apparently likes it? Well, saw that coming with the fucking like rabbits comment (or something like it) in the second chapter, so does that mean that we're going to get to the HLS or the mysteries of the story anytime soon? Yes no maybe so? And a very accurate portrayal of Kims facination with high performance motorbikes, yes she really does like the feel of power between her legs and yes Corscan is right, she does have potential. Heh, yeah, but of what kind, (right now I'm picturing Kim Possible Misstress of Punishment and Domination, dressed in leather and lace complete with fish net stockings five inch high stilleto heels and a whip and a riding crop, oh yeah.) what king? Also, this is not a poo question, but is it just me or does Kim require alot of trips to the bath room than normal, if so why? Is it cause of her super charged alien/mystic/half dragon/godlike body, hmm, any clue Lord K? Ahhh, COrscan is going to see Kim soon, presumably for dinner and show they the usually activity a sixteen year old slogan shouting, miniskirt wearing, pom pom waving, panty flashing cheer leader virgin would ususally partake in. Ritual druidic sex, mass orgy, a night of debauchery-Marquis de Sade style, or what, hope we find out soon Lord Kellendros, I really do.
And I know my review isn't as long as normal, but for all the size of the chapter, very few things raised comments or questions (at least in my mind), just alot of good solid info, and plenty of sexual innuendo, heeehh, in your endo. HA! Yeah I know childish, thats me. Anyhoo, sorry but I couldn't find a may to mention the possible theft and missue of Kims bodily fluids or find a way to talk about the water without sounding like a crazy person. Sorry.
And to Lord Kellendros, continue on you magnificent beast of a man you, this story is the bomb (i like it, in case that wasn't clear)!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU RULE, please post the next chapter or two soon, please. Your ever humble servent, The SupaNerd. PEACE OUT.

I almost hate you... almost. I know you have the next chapter waiting. So it's okay.

okay couple of questions that i sure will get nothing more than a amile and a evil laugh that could compete against the joker. First what is Corscan doing. sure she wants to fuck kim crazy. but at the same time she seems to be tring to help kim be more comfortable with herself and just not hide from the world as much as she has obviouslydone to this point so much she has hide from herslef. now i know confidence is one thing and a better self understanding makes one i guess the term glow more make you more attractive but it seems like she is also training her for something. After this could kim truely feel about herself if it involves more hiding. I know some friends who had a hard time comng out so is that going to be the leading factor to the breaking point in the begining of the story and will Corscan be helping the problem or hindering it. And i will admit the costant asking if she wants to back out got on my nerves.i mean i knew the reason to a degree before Corscan opened up in the end, but it aslo showed a slight fracture in the armour of extreme confidence that we have seen in the older woman to this point in the story. And its about time Kim quit thinking and just did it. somethings require more instinct and less thinking. don't get me wrong i think kim is smart, but she needs to realise thhose tingles of her spider sense that saves her ass in fights can be used in other situations. any way enough ambling and sorry if i didn't collect my thoughts enogh to make a decent review psot soon later. I7

while i wouldnt go so far as to call this a 'date' as much as the conclusion of a wager/business transaction it has all the earmarks of one of the best 'dates' a person male or female could ask for

starting in the previous chapter with all the action and adventure of the physicality they both thrive on and going through the tour then the fancy dinner at a posh hotel/restaurant to the house on the beach of one of the worlds greatest 'romantic getaways' it all but screams seduction ... by the end of the evening, when theres one final chance to back out Corscan has Kim so tightly wrapped around her finger that Kim is going to go through with it even if she is told every reason she shouldn't and Corscan essentially does just that, which is why i have doubts about the veracity of her 'what i can live with' claims ... she's spent a great deal of time and effort in shaping Kim's state of mind so that when the final chance to walk away comes and she 'orders' her to leave if she is only there because Kim 'owes' her she has manipulated Kim to the point Kim wants to know and is willing to step off the cliff on her own. no boot to the butt needed when you can convince someone its what they want

whether or not this is the case is yet to be seen but i can't help but wonder if the kick over the edge might in the long term be the kinder way to go.

=^.^=

and so it begins. after 15 chapters, of building up ness. very well played

Best chapter yet. Nuff said.

Wow...... there's really not much else that I can say that I haven't already said. Like all the others before is, this chapter was very good and had great detail! Looking forward-I mean really looking forward-to the next chapter.

And the plot thickens. Please update soon. Signed a fan of Shego.