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for Revelations of Destiny

by Kellendros

person battlestar
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Consperisy Theroes any one. What the name of all that is holy is Corsacan involved in. Stranger and stranger.

KIm's disesion to "go from the hip" for once will led to some intresting places.

And what is up with Shego and Drakken. OW!! Brain pains

More please.
person Josh84
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Once again, another great chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful morning after. More insight into Corscan is always good. Kim's take on her preferences was unique. How much many more chapters are going be flashback?
person mouserr
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was fairly nice all the way around, tender and sweet in places crude and raunchy in others ... there were a few things i didn't care for and some i loved ... for a long chapter it went by all too kwik so ... had to reread ... more than once

with all the build up to this one chapter i gotta say the ride was well worth it ... looking forward to the next

=^.^=
person Josh84
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy ****! That was amazing... and long! Of course, once I started reading it, I just couldn't stop until I reached the end.

So, should we expect more of the same in the next chapter, or are things going to finally wind down? As much as I'm enjoying this-and I AM enjoying this-I recall that these past several chapters have been flashbacks. How long till we get back to the present with Kim and Monique? Well, however long I need to wait to find out, I will - somewhat patiently.

Another fantastic chapter! Keep it up!
person me
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I counted 5 very hot orgasms. No wonder you moved this story to here, from ff.net. WICKED.
person Cyraxr
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Please update soon. Signed a fan of Shego.
person battlestar
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!

That was one of the best sences I have ever read or seen too date. Anyone who didn't have a reaction needs to have their pulse check.

Next chapter, please, and soon.
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I stand corrected. It was perfectly done. Once I started I couldn't stop. When I got to the end I wanted more. I eagerly await more.
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Good story Lord K. If Kim is telling this to Monique ,she must be climbing the walls.