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Whoo! I know Ron's monkey issues can get annoying, but man, Kim went off the handle. I mean, she acted like a total b****. Sorry if that sounds harsh, but it seems to fit. I know that she's got a lot to deal with, but still. As for the fight between Kim and Monkey Fist... I take that back; that was no fight, that was a slaughter! And that was just Monkey Fist. When Shego finally does get involved, I dread what Kim might do to her.

Fantastic chapter! Looking forward for more!

Kim’s initial reaction to Ron’s whiney hiney is so typical canon Kim. I can only imagine that she probably “thinks” those things on every mission but Disney doesn’t do soap opera style vocal thoughts so we are just left to decipher her glares and growls as such. I agree with BT on the whole crazy angry Kim. And for those FF writers that think little Kimmie Ann doesn’t cuss there has been an incident in canon where she was about to cuss and was cut off by a parental unit. SO again I can see her becoming a sailor and with her obvious anger issues the flow of her increasing language and violence is not only believable but expected.

How many of the Monkey ninjas did she “seriously” injure? I have a feeling someone like Kim would keep count. Also, would she have stopped beating Monkey Fist if Ron hadn’t stopped her by getting her attention? I got the feeling her reasoning that she wouldn’t have killed him because she couldn’t, didn’t seem to fit with her actions. I felt more like she was trying to convince herself than actually stating her true beliefs. Or maybe she was not even aware of how badly she was hurting him. Sort of like Coach Kim not seeing the obsessed tyrant she was becoming and those were little children playing soccer… A sport she admitted not being into? One can only imagine how easily and deeply she would lose it with her contemporaries over something she truly had a passion for. So yes as far as cartoon characters with G ratings go, Kim Possible is VERY disturbed! Way to bring that out in your story.
I also like that you made Ron early KP Ron and not the total sniveling little shit he became in season 4. Sometimes I wonder WHY Kim puts up with THAT Ron. He still bother’s me which is good because I really don’t like to um… like him!

I am dying to read Monique’s reaction to all of what Kim is telling her. It still could go either way with Corscan in Mo’s eyes but I know that girl has good instincts.
One other thing, IF Corscan is teaching Kim to “read” people won’t Kim eventually be able to see that the big kitty she playing with is a predator? And if Corscan’s a tiger and Kim is a lioness, what does that make Shego? A panther? Speaking of my favorite villain, when will Miss Go be making her debut in your story? I know everyone asks this and you slip away from a direct answer but how soon is soon? If we are good readers/reviewers will it be in this month? Before Christmas? Before next summer?

Again PLEASE add another Chapter soon! I’m hooked… reel me in! Give me Shego so I can get this hook out of my mouth already!

There is the reaction I was expecting from Kim when it comes to true violence it just took the confrontation of having to make the chose of it herself for future battles to trigger it. I like how you compared the two missions but in my opinion Corscan went to kill them in Kim's mission really quick, of course it is in line with her personalty and she did say that she does kill when it isn't need but still there is way more to her past then she has told. That said please update soon. Signed a fan of Shego.

Ok I NEVER and I mean NEVER post reviews. This is my first actually. I usually leave it to my GF Kigo-licious to do that but this story sucked me in so deep I had to tell you JUST what you are doing to me! I can’t eat or sleep unless I am forced fed or collapse from exhaustion. I am all bug eyed from reading this story and I am hanging here dying for more. So here is what I love and a little criticism too.
Damn! One of the BEST lesbian Sex scenes I have read for KP. Seriously, but you know that don’t you. I am not even going to go into how many times I had to stop reading chapter 16 for fear of dehydration from the loss of one particular body fluid. I so wish it had been Shego with Kim because that would have sent me over the edge but well… I have a feeling you will get me there eventually. Also, aside from the frequent peeing (which you did eventually explain) and the taking food to the bathroom, you have the girl nature down which is something that male written Kigo stories sometimes lack. Pretty much everything else is dead on or close to it. The way you described Kim’s feelings about a threesome and her devolvement once she starts having sex and getting sucked into Corscan’s world is also spot on. It reminds me of similar events that happened in my life. So the realism is there. I like where this story is going. I just need one little thing… Shego. OK, keep it coming (hard and fast like I like it) and PLEASE Lord Master, give me KiGo!

This is starting to explore some themes that I have been trying to develop in "Enter the Naked Mole Rat", and it does it very well indeed...

More! More!

Choices make the hero. And Heroes make the hard choices. Excellent chapter.

Whoa, talk about drama. This is intense! And this is just the chapter leading up to the confrontation with Monkey Fist. I know that the actual fight is not going to be pretty, but I'm looking forward to it anyway.

Great job! Keep it up!

Kim had a milder reaction to true violence then I thought she would have, but all an all well written. Please update soon. Signed a fan of Shego.

I've been waiting to read this for monthes now, I'm glad I checked back to see if you have started posting.

Worth the wait.

Deeper into Corscan life we go the more complex it becomes. Can't wait to see Leadership Training 101 as taught by Corscan.