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Thanks for the new chap... can't wait for the action to begin again.

Figured Ron would need processing time after he heard the tale but I didn't think he would leave like that. Signed a fan of Shego.

How do you trust your oldest and best friend when they don't show you the same courtesy? Poor Ron's been played for a fool; and they say true friends will have the decency to stab you in the front. Nobody hurts us like friends or family.

Frankly, I have no sympathy for KP; she got off light if Ron's still on speaking terms.

For some strange reason I'm hearing Fiona Apple's "Criminal" in my head -how appropriate.

Another good chapter, but what of Shego? I salivate at the hellfire and sh!t-storm she's going to rain down.

Well this is certainly a first. A KiGo fic that actually captures Ron's buffoonish antics without making him look like a total idiot. A lot of his comedy is physical, which is difficult to convey in writing. You did an excellent job of capturing his essence while still steering clear of "Season 4 fucktard." Even though he's appeared in other chapters, this is the first time I feel like you've really nailed his character. He's a goofy guy who runs away from stuff he can't handle.

Speaking of which, I think his reaction to Kim's coming out was the most realistic I've seen since Blackbird's "Maternal Instinct." Ron is inclined to flee from his problems, and while he invariably comes through in the end, there are certain periods where it seems like he's abandoned Kim altogether. He doesn't mean to hurt her, but in his mind, he'd be hurting her more if he stayed and told her how he really felt about this. He needs time to process this, which I can understand.

I second epyon avenger's comment on Rufus. He's a very visual character, which is difficult to put into writing. I think you did an excellent job of conveying his thought process in a way that made him seem to have more common sense than Ron, even though his actual intelligence is limited by his species.

All in all, great chapter and I can't wait to see how this turns out. :D

Well, that could've gone better, but then again, I guess it could've gone worse, too.

Good job. Looking forward to how this drama unfolds in the next chapter.

More Mo is always a good thing. Any chances of you writing Kim/Mon a story or oneshot when this epic is complete? I can't even begin to try to predict Ron's reaction to Kim's revelations.

I just wanna get one thing off my chest. I wa really really hoping to hear Kim's version of the Shego butt kicking so I can discover WTF was going on in her head during it all. What else was she thinking that she did not say. We heard 'I don't want you', but I also wanted to see inside her head such as visuals going on in her mind... that inner voice, ya know? I guess maybe you'll provide that insight at a later point, I hope.

Okay, that aside, to me this chapter served to provide a good laugh between Kim and Monique. I didn't really learn anything to put it simply.

I really wanted to hear Kim's version of what happened during the fight with Shego. I still don’t know much about her frame of mind other than she went CRAZY! It was nice though to have a light humorous chapter after so many heavy dark ones. I also liked how once Kim started talking about Shego she became one-track minded about it. Tasty! I can’t wait for the KiGo! Gimmie more please!

Ah-ha! Now this is something I definitely I'm looking forward to: Kim finally tells Ron the WHOLE story... well, maybe except for the part about Shego. How he takes it, I can only begin to imagine! After all, he's always been prone to drama. Whoo!

Needless to say, another great chapter. More needless to say, I'm looking forward to the next one.

That was so funny! Monique is hilarious, her attitude is different from what they show on telivision but it's funny as hell. The way she talks, referring to herself in the 3rd person, so funny! my gosh... I was doubled up in silent laughter the entire time.