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for Revelations of Destiny

by Kellendros

person me
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh snap! I knew Shego knew about [The Way]....I srsly can't wait to see how the next one goes!!!!
person T
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is sooo good! can't wait for the next chapter!
person beeftony
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Meant to review this earlier, but real life got in the way. Since most of the stuff has already been said I'll just focus on the things that haven't been mentioned.

For instance, I found it quite hilarious and also incredibly fitting that Shego would fully indulge in her fantasies about Kim rather than try to deny them, perhaps in the interest of working them out of her system so she doesn't have to deal with them anymore. Shego is a very emotional creature, and she always vents her frustrations rather than letting them bottle up inside her. Again, very in-character.

As a corrolary to that, I couldn't help laughing out loud when you revealed the true reason she's so distraught over these feelings: they aren't just her typical shallow fantasies. Instead, she's falling in love. That passage perfectly mirrors everything Corscan described love as being in Chapter 22. Or at least the first inklings of what could likely grow into love. And even though Shego wasn't a part of that conversation, she knows what's happening and it totally devastates her because she realizes that this is one problem she can't run away from, because it will continue to haunt her until she deals with it.

Again, great chapter and I can't wait for the next. Enough with the solo scenes! Give us more KiGo already! :D
person Josh84
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, Shego certainly didn't have any problems pleasuring herself with Kim on her mind. Yet she had the real thing on top of her several hours ago, and she freaked out and ran away. What's the deal? When will the confusion end?

Anyway, terrific chapter - as always. :) Looking forward to what happens next, especially with Shego taking "one of the hardest steps" she's ever had to take in her life.
person Lady Physics: High IQ Dominatrix
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now THIS (See: Ch. 29-32) is what the folks -even back in the cheap seats- came here to see!

I was getting a tad listless before Ch. 29 (See: Losing Interest... rapidly). Now? Not so much. At Ch. 32 the diametrical opposites make their way about fixed orbits towards a super collision -Damn, Physics is Sexy- the results of which shall spawn new matter... or so it is hoped (unless something or someone comes along to "cock it up!"). Only time and chapters will tell what is to become of Us all; of who stays and who goes.

KiGo: Goes 'All the Way to 11.'

schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. It was interesting seeing Shego get in touch with herself. I look foward to more.
person Rose
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay. Now that we've seen both Shego and Kim deal with this new found revelation (of destiny, perhaps?) on their own.... how or more importantly WHEN will they deal with it together? Hmm?

This chapter was very intense and I found it funny that Shego thought there might be something medically wrong with her to be feeling such a way. I was even more surprised at the 'chance' Shego gave to Kim when pleasuring herself. With those results confirming what she was too afraid to admit to outright, her abuse of the (poor, unsuspecting) wall was completely believable in the next step of admittance.

All the emotions that Kim and Shego have gone through and are going through sound like the 7 stages of grief. Which hopefully will not be what they feel when they finally get together... right? Please!

person me
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was pretty intense, my favourite part was when she dried off using her powers. Not to say I didn't enjoy all the other stuff and the epiphany at the end...just I want to be able to dry off without a towel!
person tecate
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yea! We got to crawl deep into Kimmie’s thoughts with this chapter. So nice to see her NOT have a major freak out about the Shego incident since SHE started it. I love how once again Mo came to the rescue of being the ever knowing voice of reason. All around amazing chapter. I really like getting to know how the characters are thinking and feeling and this chapter delivered and then some!

Now I just need Kim and Shego to confront each other about their new sitch! Oh and when Kim tells C about all this I think it is going to ROCK too so I’m not sure WHAT I am looking forward to more. The KiGo I guess… And I suppose the V is going to become Kimmie’s new stress reliever… Yummm pills! Why do I want to see Kimmie lose it so bad? I guess it is true about the good girls… we love watching them fall!
person Josh84
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This just wasn't Kim's day. Thanks to the fight with Shego, she had to cancel her time with Corscan; and Shego ran off before Kim could "get off"; and to top it all off, she couldn't bring herself to self-satisfy herself. Kim knows that she wants Shego, and-thanks to a little help from Monique-she knows the reason why, but yet she can't act on those feelings. That's where I'm confused. Then again, I don't have that much knowledge about stuff like this. And let's not forget Shego, wherever she is. No doubt she's thinking more on this like Kim.

One things for sure, I'm definitely looking forward to Kim and Shego's next encounter, and the drama that unfolds with it!

Another bon-diggity job, man! Keep it up!