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*reading,reading,reading....faceplant on the cliffie*

Damn you evil cliffy!!

Another excellent chapter!

This is one of the few fics that I have read where Shego has actually killed. It's a little disturbing, but then again, like she said, it's not like she goes around randomly killing people. There was always a reason for her actions. For curiousity's sake, I do hope that we'll get to find out what exactly the Heartbreaker did to Shego that led her killing him.

I think its great that Kim still want to explore her developing relationship with Shego after all that she heard. But, then again, she did keep seeing Corscan after seeing that recording of her killing all those people.

Now this is a strange development. The entire CI facility deserted and emptied, all that is left are a few bags and a note to Kim.

This was a great way to start the week. Excellent chapter. Looking forward to what happens next.

Wow, while I waited fro this chapter and I found the foreshadowing in the past chapter really well done, I feel like you dangled a cookie in front of my face and ate it a split second before I could. You might as well have stopped me right before the top of the hill on a roller coaster. And so I dangle, waiting for the rush I know is sure to come, but the silence is deafening.
Excellent chapter, and the thing about corscan being like Shego? very well played ^^

Yay for upcoming hard questions! An improved Shego and a possibly pissed off Possible (no pun intended) should provide Corscan w/ just a little bit of a problem. Even Kim in full "I want answers NOW" mode is scary *shudder at mental image*

Well I had a feeling that Shego knew about the way, that thing you did with her powers becoming more intense was a really good idea. I hope that she grows farther in her skill levels. This is going to turn into a conspiracy thing,considering everything Shego said about Corscan. I loved Kim's reaction to it. Great chapter, and I look forward to teh confrontation!

Kellendros, RoD is good stuff, i'm liking the part i've read so far, which is up to chapter 15, and will continue to read it. Thank you for publishing your work of art.

This has got to be my favorite chapter so far, where all the tension that's been building up over the last several chapters reaches its zenith and then dissipates just as quickly. I just love the way you used Shego in this chapter. She just has a way of cutting through all the crap and getting straight to the point. It's one of the many things I admire about her character.

As always it's the little things that make this such an enjoyable read for me. I like that Kim had enough foresight to call Monique to tell her where she'd be going; it shows that she's learning to trust her allies more. Also, I couldn't help but smile at the way you totally went against the cliche of Shego indulging in the occasional drink. She probably set a few bars on fire before figuring that one out. ;) And the "Mad Max" reference was classic. :lol:

Kim and Shego's conversation feels more like hammering out a contract, which I'm grateful for as most KiGo stories I've read just have them jumping in headfirst without really thinking about it. Here they set the terms right from the beginning. It's a welcome change of pace from the stories where they just up and decide to jump into bed with each other.

Speaking of which, I love love LOVE Shego's sexual hang-up. Love it! And hate it at the same time since it precludes any possibility of what I want to see happening any time soon. Still, I can't help but marvel at your amazing read on her character. You have a gift, my friend. :)

I'll agree with everyone else here that the hardwood floors joke was hilarious. That's another one of those little things that sets your work a step above all the rest.

So now Shego knows what Kim's been studying, and she's none too happy about it. I would suspect that someone of her caliber would know about [The Way], and I can't wait to see the confrontation with Corscan.

Later! :D

Needless to say, another terrific chapter.

I like this new development with Shego's powers. With them, Shego was alway a dangerous adversary, but now, thanks to her training, she's practically a force of nature!

After hearing all that happened during the fight between Shego and Corscan, Kim was able to hold her temper, just barely. I gotta say, I'm impressed. I found it funny how Kim got aggravated by the fact that not only does Shego heal much faster than normal, but also by the fact that the villainess was able to get stronger in under half the time it took Kim. That must really stick in her craw.

Yet as fast as Shego can heal, Corscan was able to heal up in just two days. Even though the explanation was plausable, it's still unbelievable. But, then again, that's one of things that makes the woman so mysterious and interesting.

Keep it up, man!

Wow. This is the first new "epic" I've picked up in a long time. And it is truly epic. I found myself reading almost non-stop and completely enjoying all of it. Aside from the very, very few spelling errors, I've been extremely impressed with the plot. I can't wait for the story to continue!

For awhile there, I thought that the Kigo was going to finally begin, but alas, that's been put on hold - again. I was a little surprised when it was Shego that stopped it, but after she explained a little about her past, it actually made sense.

Now Shego says it's time to pay a visit to Corscan. Hmm-hmm. I anxious to see how that goes, especially when Kim learns that it won't be the first time Shego and Corscan have met. I'm also looking forward to what Shego knows of - (all italicized)[The Way].

Good job. Awaiting the next chapter.