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December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so much goin on in these last two chapters i dunno where to begin tho i guess the start is a good place ... Kim is definitely ... active to say the least ... id say Wade is underestimating things a bit on how hard itd be to do what Corscan did, it takes a lot more than just a coder or team of coders to get rid of _all_ data considering that some caches are backed up on offsite manually moved systems that have no physical connection to the net itself ... however she did it Corscan had to move mountains to pull that off ... Ron almost screwed the pooch there too tho I'm curious to see how Kim would react to learning he actually managed to get into the complex
then theres Eric ... somehow I dont think he is just gonna sit back and let Kim ditch that easily. he was sent to be her 'distraction after all and so far thats been a bust
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then theres Eric ... somehow I dont think he is just gonna sit back and let Kim ditch that easily. he was sent to be her 'distraction after all and so far thats been a bust
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December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! That was indeed "a great way to start the day!" I knew that Kim has become a dirty girl, but man! Those thougts she had... Whoo!
I knew that Monique would waste no time grilling Kim for info when she met up with her. Her reactions were right on the money. There were times I had to pause in reading to laugh, the conversation was pretty funny from time to time.
Have we reached the end of the school year already? From the little dialogue between Ron and the girls, finals have come and gone, they're in their last few days of school, and summer is just around the corner, if not already here. Man, with all the flashbacks you included and going back and forth between them and the present, I've just about lost track of where, or rather "when" we are.
Anyway, great chapter yet again, Lord Kellendros! Looking forward to the next!
I knew that Monique would waste no time grilling Kim for info when she met up with her. Her reactions were right on the money. There were times I had to pause in reading to laugh, the conversation was pretty funny from time to time.
Have we reached the end of the school year already? From the little dialogue between Ron and the girls, finals have come and gone, they're in their last few days of school, and summer is just around the corner, if not already here. Man, with all the flashbacks you included and going back and forth between them and the present, I've just about lost track of where, or rather "when" we are.
Anyway, great chapter yet again, Lord Kellendros! Looking forward to the next!
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December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kim! wow....that was pretty intense, she seems to get turned on by just about everything doesn't she? I saw that Anne wasn't there, how come? I totally forot about monique, though... ^^great chapter
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December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, great! Now the Tweebs know about Shego. Those two had better be careful; the way they've been acting lately has already made Kim a little suspicious. Sooner or later, she's going to find out that they know her secret, and when that happens... Ahem. Anyway, at least they haven't told anyone yet, but their dialogue in this chapter gives me the impression that they are up to something.
Good chapter. A little shorter than the others, but good nonetheless. Keep it up.
I wish you a Merry Christmas!
Good chapter. A little shorter than the others, but good nonetheless. Keep it up.
I wish you a Merry Christmas!
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December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was one wicked chapter, I didn't know that's what Shego felt like, I was with Kim all along, but that thing with the tiwns really threw me for a loop ^^ I hope corscan shows up soon ^^ one big happy threesome!
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December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmm if i were to hazard a guestimate right about now i'd be tempted to say the tweebs are trying to help Kim, just basin that on what was said and not said in their exchange
Kim should probly trust her parents to be a bit more open minded i think, perhaps itll be hard to explain dating Shego but i think theyd be ok with her dating girls, James should be fine with it at least lol
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Kim should probly trust her parents to be a bit more open minded i think, perhaps itll be hard to explain dating Shego but i think theyd be ok with her dating girls, James should be fine with it at least lol
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December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. You know, since the last chapter, I tried to predict what the letter would say. I was close. It seems that Corscan knew Kim all too well, knowing that Kim would try to find her; and with Wade and Shego helping her out, Kim just might pull it off.
I still find it funny how Shego still feels uncomfortable about Kim's new attitude. In most Kigo fics, the roles are reversed. Not that Shego doesn't act that way in this story, but it seems that Kim one-ups her every now and then. :) It makes the story all the more interesting.
It kinda tanks that we now will have to wait for weeks at a time for future chapters, but, as you have proven so many times, it will definitely be worth the wait. Of that, I have no doubt. Keep up the great work.
I still find it funny how Shego still feels uncomfortable about Kim's new attitude. In most Kigo fics, the roles are reversed. Not that Shego doesn't act that way in this story, but it seems that Kim one-ups her every now and then. :) It makes the story all the more interesting.
It kinda tanks that we now will have to wait for weeks at a time for future chapters, but, as you have proven so many times, it will definitely be worth the wait. Of that, I have no doubt. Keep up the great work.
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December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
32. Excellent change of pace with Kim being the more sexually one in a kigo ship.
33-36. Terriffic KiGo interactiion. Shego's past and Kim's reaction to it were handled great. Shego's take on Kim/corscan was brilliant. I loro seeing what Corscan is up to and if Kigo can find her.
33-36. Terriffic KiGo interactiion. Shego's past and Kim's reaction to it were handled great. Shego's take on Kim/corscan was brilliant. I loro seeing what Corscan is up to and if Kigo can find her.
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December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter as always. One could argue that it was a bit slow, but it intored another mystry, and although we arn't running out of any, more is always welcome. I hope you can keep track of all the twists and turns yourself. So I'll wait for your next chapter, the suspense isn't as great when shego wasn't there, but its still pretty big ^^ lates.
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December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, dude, you can't end it like that! YOU JUST CAN'T END IT LIKE THAT!!!
Well, actually you can, but that doesn't mean I have to like it.... ;)
Anyway, magnificent chapter and I just love the new revelations. Your attention to detail is clear right from the start, as I learned at least five things about helicopters that I didn't know before. And the bathroom thing.... "This is your fault, Possible!" lol
I loved Shego's commentary on Kim's story; she's certainly different from Monique in that she comments rather than commiserates, but that's a good thing as far as I'm concerned. Kim could use a perspective from someone who knows more about the dark side of life than she does.
Hey, you weren't kidding when you said this was going to be a non-conventional KiGo story; usually she's apparently too moral to kill even though she's evil, which would make no freaking sense when applied to the tone of this story, so I'm glad that you went a different route. Seriously though, she's lost count?! Then again, I suppose it would be more alarming if she did keep track, so....
What I like best about the whole thing is that, as Kim put it, Shego doesn't play by any rules but her own. There are things in this world that she considers to be truly wrong, and even though she's on the side of evil, she won't tolerate them. Everyone that she's been paid to kill or wanted to kill had it coming as far as I'm concerned, and she was morally justified, if not necessarily "right." But then again, what does Shego care about what other people say is "right?"
Excellent chapter and I can't wait for the final pre-written one. It'll be tough waiting for you to write them, but then I suppose I don't have any room to talk.... ;)
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Well, actually you can, but that doesn't mean I have to like it.... ;)
Anyway, magnificent chapter and I just love the new revelations. Your attention to detail is clear right from the start, as I learned at least five things about helicopters that I didn't know before. And the bathroom thing.... "This is your fault, Possible!" lol
I loved Shego's commentary on Kim's story; she's certainly different from Monique in that she comments rather than commiserates, but that's a good thing as far as I'm concerned. Kim could use a perspective from someone who knows more about the dark side of life than she does.
Hey, you weren't kidding when you said this was going to be a non-conventional KiGo story; usually she's apparently too moral to kill even though she's evil, which would make no freaking sense when applied to the tone of this story, so I'm glad that you went a different route. Seriously though, she's lost count?! Then again, I suppose it would be more alarming if she did keep track, so....
What I like best about the whole thing is that, as Kim put it, Shego doesn't play by any rules but her own. There are things in this world that she considers to be truly wrong, and even though she's on the side of evil, she won't tolerate them. Everyone that she's been paid to kill or wanted to kill had it coming as far as I'm concerned, and she was morally justified, if not necessarily "right." But then again, what does Shego care about what other people say is "right?"
Excellent chapter and I can't wait for the final pre-written one. It'll be tough waiting for you to write them, but then I suppose I don't have any room to talk.... ;)
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