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Wow! Two chapters in two days. I love it!

No impressive house would be complete without an equally impressive garage, plus some awesome bikes and cars! ;)

So, Kim's first tour of Europe was pretty cool. Got to see some of the sights, and got to learn some of the history.

Great stuff, Lord Kellendros! Looking forward to more!

wow nice thing about the tan.

One of the best storys ive red so far, and also one of teh most well written storys too. I cant wait to see what will ahppen next UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!! =)

great chapter, you really have a knack for description, one thing tat made me lol was your description of the fruit trees as giant bonsai, an oxymoron if I ever saw one. Your last sentance was tricky, before immersing herself in..relaxing! I love it. this place must freaking huge though, bet you'd like to live there eh?

Damn, damn... DAMN! That is some home Shego's got! That's my dream home--No, scratch that, even in my wildest dreams, my home would look nothing like this one. It may not be a private island home like Seniors have, but it just as good if not better. It's certainly big enough. If you weren't already in the kind of shape that Kim and Shego are in now, you'd get there quick traveling all through that house... if you want to even call it that! =P

And the gym was, as Kim put it, just amazing! It's, in my opinion, even better than Corscan's gym!

Outstanding chapter, Lord Kellendros! As always, very descriptive and very detailed. Some very funny moments. Loved the little moment with the cat. Hilarious. :) Looking forward to how things turn out with Kim and Shego now living together. And I'm looking forward to finding out why this place seems familiar to Kim.

The KimShego arc of this story is shaping up nicely. As always the use of the characters is excellent. The more reference it the more I want a full history of Lynn and Corscan. Keep uo the awesome work.

Damn this is one hell of a story. I'm intently looking forward to more. Please Please keep it up.

Poor Kim, really does seem like Corscan did something to her mentally. From how Kim was acting at the beginning of the story she was showing classic symptoms of someone suffering sexual abuse. You are doing a fantastic job of portraying how sick Corscan is and her ability in twisting Kim's mental outlook.

Wispr

I fucking love this story!!!

Another chilling chapter. Your writing really captures the horror of what Kim will have to submit to. It's very apparent that Kim must by under some kind of influence, you don't accept gifts from some one who is manipulating/forcing you into an intimate encounter. I"ll be back later to read more, just can't handle to much at one time.

Nasty but very good story.

Wispr