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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're wonderful. You write the best Invader Zim fanfiction on here--in my opinion anyway. Keep writing!
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August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHOA!
Dude, you killed him!
I'll leave a more complete review after I read chapter 6. (And I was starting to like that Strange guy, too...)
Dude, you killed him!
I'll leave a more complete review after I read chapter 6. (And I was starting to like that Strange guy, too...)
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August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
On second thought, I couldn't have expected that to be the worst that this fic would have in store. It WAS a surprise, though. You poked Strange into the story a few times, then finally started to flesh him out as a character, then BAM, he's dead! Ah well. He was cool while he was around.
The way you write these characters makes them interesting again. They're completely in-character, and yet you introduce new aspects of them and make new connections. But they make complete sense, even as you have your creative way with them. Like when Nny casually takes a swig of the fizz-wizz BEFORE he goes over to help Dib. XD Awesome. And the Beethoven stuff. You took that little detail from the comic and expanded it, made it important. The other direct references to JTHM (like the NIH fans, etc.) give the reader that recognition (the good kind, unlike Dib's recognition before, heheh) of the storyline, as if you're telling another part of JTHM that Jhonen didn't cover, even though it was going on at the same time, behind the scenes. Nny killing Mmy there was unexpected, though, because before that everything was going the way it did in the original. Hmm. And I like how Dib and Nny's friendship is building, here. Well, damn, I like the whole thing.
I'm sorry it took me so long to get to reading this. My classes just ended, though, and reading this was the first thing I did when I got home. I'm really enjoying it, it's been a while since I read something good. 8D (In other words, DO WANT. MOAR!)
The way you write these characters makes them interesting again. They're completely in-character, and yet you introduce new aspects of them and make new connections. But they make complete sense, even as you have your creative way with them. Like when Nny casually takes a swig of the fizz-wizz BEFORE he goes over to help Dib. XD Awesome. And the Beethoven stuff. You took that little detail from the comic and expanded it, made it important. The other direct references to JTHM (like the NIH fans, etc.) give the reader that recognition (the good kind, unlike Dib's recognition before, heheh) of the storyline, as if you're telling another part of JTHM that Jhonen didn't cover, even though it was going on at the same time, behind the scenes. Nny killing Mmy there was unexpected, though, because before that everything was going the way it did in the original. Hmm. And I like how Dib and Nny's friendship is building, here. Well, damn, I like the whole thing.
I'm sorry it took me so long to get to reading this. My classes just ended, though, and reading this was the first thing I did when I got home. I'm really enjoying it, it's been a while since I read something good. 8D (In other words, DO WANT. MOAR!)
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August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! So freakin' awesome how you meld the crossover... I've seen other people try, and it tends to not work so well... But you gots it to work! Yays! I know I want that RAPADR fic, but I... I think I want more for this too. XD I know, I know, greedy aren't I? And I bet if I wander over to some of your other fics, I'm gonna want more of them too. >.> I think you have another really big fan, and it's your own fault too. XD
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Darn you! I hope this hasn't been discontinued
Please update soon :(
Please update soon :(
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August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, I hope you keep going! This is by far the best JTHM/IZ crossover I've read, the characters are not OOC in the least, and they interact perfectly! Please update soon! I've been checking back every day!!! :D
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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a wicked murder mystery! Your characters have the best dialogue! Even the one's you can't see: “…stole like two hundred bucks worth of cheese…” I want you to know that I'm going to say this incessantly tomorrow.
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July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Teeeeheeeeheeee I love it!!!! Murder and guro are the most beautiful things on earth!
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Love you..hate you...no LOVE you!!!! Deffinately Love you. This story is so purtyful!