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Dear Florvile,
Just inquiring, but when will you be updating your story “Into the Web” on AdultFanfiction? I remember back when it was first posted back in 2007 and was immediately enthralled with it from the start. It is incredibly well written and I love its originality. Even after all these years I still reread it every few months in the hopes that you have posted a new chapter. In spite of this, it seems that you may have abandoned it and that makes me awfully sad. That being said, I have finally decided to just ask you point blank if you will or will-not be updating this wonderful story ever again. You don’t have to explain your reasons behind whatever answer you give me, I’m not trying to be nosy or demanding. I know how little control we sometimes have with our lives. Accordingly, whatever response you chose to give me I promise not to bother you again. A simple yes or no will satisfy me.
Thank You for Your Time

Ok wow! This story is so good! At first I was a little thrown off by it being a crossover and the pairing being Jonny and Dib but I'm so glad that I ended up reading it anyways! I even made a account on here just so I could properly write a review and hopefully find some way to have an alert or something sent to me when a the next chapter is posted! I am seriously looking forward to the next chapter of this and hope you update soon!

I have nothing to say other than I'm watching and waiting and gasping loudly every 5 minutes....Oh, wait, the gasping part is just me dying from joy....
Another thing, IF YOU DO NOT WRITE MORE I WILL COME OVER THERE AND....uh....DO NASTY STUFF, TO YOU!!!!

*gasp, gasp, gasp*
Dying, be back soon....maybe.

You are amazing. Out of all the stories of yours that I've read so far I think this is by far my favorite. I chock that up to the whole crime theme this story has. I've always love stories like that. I feel bad that Officer Strange died. But seeing Zim in the latest chapter made me feel better. I hope you update this soon. I can't wait to see where you go with this.

I know you havnt updated this story since like... 2007. But... PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLLLLEEAAASSEEE continue it! You are the BEST and possibly only good writer in the fandom! Your ideas are extremely original and your writing style is SO fun to read! I really want to know what happens next in this. *checks your DA in hopes that more is posted there* :(

This... is... AMAZING. This is the true definition of epic win. And you even wove Zim into it, I wasn't even expecting such a treat! Can--can I please have more?

lol, Zim and his War Games. I'm really liking this story (I know you haven't updated this story in like 2 and a half years but a girl can still hope right?) anyway your wrighting style is amazing and i've been a fan of your FF's for quite some time so thank you.
~Poptart

Hey, is this done yet?
*sigh*.. You're a genius. I'm looking forward to more.. mmm.. and if there isn't. Oh, will I be displeased! I'm hoping they'll be much more Nny.. You write him well, and believably. Jhonen would be proud, perhaps. I am at least.

Alex
xx

...Is this the end?
Is it?
ACK!!! *wantswantsWANTS*
ME

Hey, just wanted to point out that Squee's house number is 779 not 775. I'm pretty sure it's not in the JTHM books just isn the SQUEE ones, k?
Thanx!