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by rinflowers1986

person CrazyAlice
schedule April 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Omg what happens next I'm dying to know please continue I'm begging you please 'on my knees japanese stile respect and beg'
person blue.rose
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Any chance of you coming back to this one? It would make me really happy if you did.
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I had waited for this for a while, and it is just as good as all of the others. Keep on doing what you do best!
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH...MY...God, This is great, please continue with it. Inever really liked the Danny, Dash pairing, but you make it work..I love this story.
person Anon
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't know where to begin... Amazing, sexy, indepth, constant... I don't know, whatever- Everything is so damn 'good'. You've just shoved yourself neatly into Danny's and Dash's shoes and started to role play like it was a breeze through a park. You are spectacular! I mean, if someone else tried writting this, I would likely brushed it aside as complete smut, but this has so much thought into this- Especially for Danny's motives. Wow. Please, I really hope you update soon. I can't wait to read more!
person Anon
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was really well written. I love how you described Dash's world (at least, I'm presuming Dash, of course :) ) through his eyes. I really enjoyed reading this chapter and your development of Dash's life style is really neat. Please update soon, I'd really love to read more of this- and I'm not usually a Dash/Danny fan either! :O
person imperial13
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you need to email me, rin, i'm leaving soon. but the story was great