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for Change of Life

by wraithmaster777

person shylust
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and I just can't wait for the next chapter!!1 Keep up the good work :)

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person gooda man
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you better finish this year or you are in one hell of a lot of trouble damn it i love this story it is sooooo cute you are a beautiful writer
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm a fan of plot, so if you want to give Dash a nice dream, go right ahead. Me? I'm indifferent here. I just want to figure out what the hell is going on. You rock!

-Rin
person isthatreallyimportant
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cool, this is really good hope you continue soon
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, things are getting a bit clearer now. And such a nice twist. Love it!

-Rin
person imperial13
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lovley as it always is, and i hpe you don't mind me saying but Rin really is great and so are you. <3
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Doggy!!!!!!!!! Danny's got a doggy!Danny's got a doggy!Danny's got a doggy!Danny's got a doggy!*dances around* Great update, and Dash dreaming about a kitty was just too laughable. You're awesome ^^

-Rin
person Murder Junkie
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*chews* Dash/Danny is so yummy. Aside from some spelling errors, this is good. Maybe you should get someone to proofread your work? *shrugs* Me, I'm so hungry for good Danny Phantom yaoi/slash/whathaveyou, I'll happily overlook any flaws. (My fandoms, they starve me..!)

*bows* Well I hope you keep writing, regardless of whether you find a beta or choose to write in full on 1337. The stories must be written..!
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OHhh! Now I know! Is it Dora and Arogon? *hopes its not said in the next chapter cuz that would be embarrassing* Anyway, been gone a while, but I'm back and you updated and life is great. Onward to the next chapter! *fies away*

-Rin
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hm, doggy person! Nice touch, at least its not a new "transfer student" thats been used and abused more than a telephone pole on a busy street corner. And its difficult to get to the bottom of Danny's heritage, we know Maddie's side is southern but Jack's is in the dark. He does talk about living with his family in Mystery Meat and how they had to eat horse meat during "the war" (never clarified). Russian could fit nicely with both sides so good choice.

Keep being awesome

-Rin