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by LoneHowler

person heaven56
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was interesting.
person Sed
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap.

I'm sure it's a great story, but I just can't get past the severe lack of punctuation. It isn't personal. I'd just advise not writing when sick. I'll come by when you update.