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June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I didn't really know what to say about these last couple chapters other than great job. But still, more than anything else, I love the way you captured Kim's point of view when she is in her 'lust mode' or whatever else you want to call it. It really is entrancing.
Looking forward to this next chapter. It will be interesting to see just what you have planned outside of the usual 'sex chapters.'
Great job and keep it up. Still hoping to see an update for either "Going Beyond Bonding" or "Valentine's Surprise." Until then, good luck to you.
Looking forward to this next chapter. It will be interesting to see just what you have planned outside of the usual 'sex chapters.'
Great job and keep it up. Still hoping to see an update for either "Going Beyond Bonding" or "Valentine's Surprise." Until then, good luck to you.
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June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yum Yum...this one juicy chapter...I cant wait for the next part where Ron helps Tara with her "problem", I´m really wondering who will be the master between those two :D
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June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dude.... I LOVED IT!!! There just isn't enough good Ron/Mon sex scenes or stories but THIS ONE IS THE BEST SO FAR!!! I can't wait for the next chapter and yes I do like your story chapters as well as your "hot" chapters... Great work Z, Bravo, Bravo...
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May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I'm totally enjoying the non-step sex for now. So keep it up. And by all means, update again soon.
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May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story keeps getting better and better :O I can't wait for the next part where Monique gets to try the Ron-Sausage :D
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May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa!!! Josh is a lot more excitible then I thought! And it looks like Monique and Felix have picked a good place to move to after all! I can't wait for the next 2 chapters
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May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I just...wow. I don't really know what else to say to this chapter than just...wow.
I'm at a loss for words sir. Bravo. Truely, well done.
I'm at a loss for words sir. Bravo. Truely, well done.
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May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You play the sex so well around the story that's it's hard to remember this is supposed to be porn. Just a few things, though. Minor stuff like forgotten articles, a few forgotten verbs.
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May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i realy love this story.
what i love is that it is not just sex sex sex there is a plot which keeps me interested.
i also love the idea of ron as a dom.
p.s there are 3 ladies i would love to see ron with and they are yori, Dr Director and Mrs Dr P if at all possable.
what i love is that it is not just sex sex sex there is a plot which keeps me interested.
i also love the idea of ron as a dom.
p.s there are 3 ladies i would love to see ron with and they are yori, Dr Director and Mrs Dr P if at all possable.
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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are, without a doubt, the best writer on this site. Kim taking three guys and Bonnie, never would've seen that coming. I don't know if I've said this already, but this Nympho Kim is... what's the word... engaging? I just love to see her when she cuts loose.