rate_review Reviews

Good chapter. You keep the surprises coming. You've got wrong punctuation in a lot of places, periods instead of question marks, things like that, one instance of then/than: "If we can discuss how you're feeling, get everything out in the open, THAN we can work on it together.", and you missed the possessive on Bonnie's calm, even breathing.

I loved this chapter. In any other story, I'd probably rant and scream about the absurdity, but within the world that you have created within this story, it works. By god, it works so well. Bonnie has had many bad relationships, and at through them, Kim and Ron have been there for her, both as friends and even as lovers. Bonnie lives a lifestlyle where she doesn't distinguish between men and women in that way (this again may likely be a result of her bad relationships with just men) and throughout it all, it just works.

Looking forward to the next chapter. Hurry up!

awesome story mate...even with no sex you write a damn good story :D I can't wait for the next part and I eagerly waiting for the mysterious pyromaniac.

and I waiting for more of the swinging parties :D (if there is any more that would be)

and I hope you will let Shego met the new family member :D

You're spoiling us now, you know that, right? Two chapters in such a short span of time. You realize if you're next chapter takes any longer than a day, we'll all be knocking on your door, wondering what's taking so long? ;)

All that aside, good chapter. It didn't compare to the shocker from last chapter, but you can't keep hitting your audience with that kind of thing every time you post. Still looking forward to the next chapter though, as well as the next chapter of Valentine's, whenever you get around to it.

Okay I read all three chapters of the fire and BonBon joining clan Stoppable and all I can say is that you have done a very touching, romantic and refreshing job Z. As always I can't wait for the next chapter which knowing you it will be very "interesting" to say the least. One question how far would Shego go to help Kim and Ron? Maybe starting a fire far?

I can't believe how quickly you are keeping this updated. It is inspiring, I hope to see more. The story is hands down the best I've read for Kim Possible, even though I have never gotten into any other story that had such a dominant Ron.

I really love this story.

I'm guessing the problem with Bonnie is that living with Kim and Ron she'll want to spend most of her time as their slave to the detriment of her career and daughter.

Really? Well, I look forward to how you're gonna play this disaster. It also just now occurred to me that this story is a way to keep all shippers appeased, if not completely satisfied. The only ship you're missing is Rori. Once again, a superbly crafted chapter and easily the best story in the KP section, if not the whole site.

Also, I forgot to mention this in my last post, but I've found a number fairly well-done adult-themed Kim Possible, which I have taken the liberty of naming after this story because they relate so well to it, the last few chapters especially.

If we are allowed to post links here, http://cobra3.afraid.org/zimmerman/index.asp

The majority are under the colored section in StoneKnight's gallery.

Like I said last time, I can't wait for the next chapter Z. I'm just wondering if it's an accident or revenge from a certain ex-B@$%@&$ and if it is oh boy I don't even want to think about what Kim and Ron are going to do to him... then again maybe just a little. Great chapter and I can't wait for slave Bonnie moving in.