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Kinda faked me out there a bit I was expecting another chapter explaining how the fire got started and *boom!* review reply's. Well nice of you to do that seeing as how I guess you can't exactly respond to the reviews on here. Oh and I am so with you on porn with a story, but a good one. I guess that's why I'm into the hentai stuff. But I digress looking forward to the next real chapter and some answers to some questions. Oh and to throw my hat in the guess the fire bug thing and say her daughter accidentally left something burning or was playing with matches or some kind of electrical thing she shouldn't have touched.

Err Yoai? I'm sorry to say I'm not interested that stuff. I mean sure I'll jump when Shego and Kim go wild and Ron jumps in with Felix with Monique or Yori involved but yaoi ain't my cup of tea. Hey what happened with Yori? I just thought of her (man I'm slow today.) But I can't wait for the next chapter of your story, Keep up the great work.

Okay you just answered my Yori question, which I can't wait for and I REALLY can't wait for some Shego and Bon Bon time. And I really can't wait for the next PARTY!!! So it was Dr. D huh? Not one of my first guesses but it does make sense since this is Dr. Drakken. Oh thanks for fixing that chapter problem and for the new chapters Z keep up the great work as usual.

THANK YOU! Thank you, thank you, thank you thankyouthankyouthankyou.

So glad to see you updating this story again. I don't know if the matter is already settled or not but I would cast a vote against a Josh/Felix scene. But it's your story.

In the meantime, I don't know if you plan to bring up the subject of Ron's employee Janice, but I'd encourage you to come back to that subject. I know Kim and Ron aren't going to being having a threesome with her or anything, but it would still be interesting to see how Ron handles the delicate matter.

All my best as always and hope to read more soon.

I love it. The more I read, the more I want to see. And its not just the sex (which I can't deny is some nicely written stuff), but the story, the relationships and character development too. Its all so great. I eagerly await your next update.

-Jawelik

when are you posting the next chapter? chapter 20? i've been waiting for it since your last update. thanks!
don't stop the story! keep going!

Update!!!

... please...

PLEASE continue this story! so cool!!! whens the next chapter comin?

I would offer my service as a Beta, but school has just started again and I'm taking a law school prep course, so my schedule is just slammed as it is. If I could correct the minor errors in here, would you be willing to post them?

As to this latest chapter, I enjoyed the quick foray in Nympho Kim and the results that came from it. It kinda felt like a Deus ex Machina, but the results were worth it. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Holy moly :O this story keeps getting better and better now :O I can't wait for the next chapter :D and I wanna know who burned down BonBon's house