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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice cliffhanger, I so want to know what she saw(sorry for my spelling). Still loving the story.
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July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the chapter, especially the tension between Elisa and Fox, can't wait for the meeting with Demona that should be interesting to see how she reacts to what Goliath has planned.
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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good, I can not wait for more.
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wouldn't call story dark. I've certainly read much darker stories on the internet and many are pointless. Your story has the beginnings of an interesting plot. I hope you continue.