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schedule December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job! It's not often that I come to this website and find a story that delivers a well-written and nicely developed plot before diving into the mature stuff. This is one story that kept me captivated till the end and one that I wouldn,t mind reading again. A 10 out of 10!!!
person locksley
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dude here's hopin' ya update soonish. This is incredibly well written stuff and it would be a shame to let it go unfinished.
schedule April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh please write more.
person animekid
schedule March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this has so much potential! Please make more chapters.

I finally get to review >< Everyone is in character and it has sheldon in it! yahoo?
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really want to know what happens next.
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dude make more please want to see jennys face when she comes back
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see that they finally did it.
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn good story, I also hate the waiting between posts but it's definitely worth it. You're the first person to whom I give a perfect five out of five. Keep up the good work, I'll definitely be back to read more as it comes out.
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was good
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please get to the part where they fuck each others brains' out soon, I don't think I can wait much longer!!