rate_review Reviews

Where do I begin with this? First of all, you did an excellent job keeping all the dialogue true to each specific character. Which I can assumely credit for being a huge fan of the show. And the sex scenes and wonderfully written as well. I hope to choose to continue this story to the end and possibly write more MLaaTR fics in the future.

Are you gonna continue this any time soon? I really enjoy it! :-)

Is Sheldon over Jenny? Is Misty pregnant? I would like to see some real life consequences.

Well written and i like that you developed the relationship between the two main characters, instead of just throwing them into the sex scenes. I look forward to reading the next chapter. Keep it up.

Hello, It's been a while since i last looked in on this story. I'm not sure if you're even still around (or if you even check the site) But if you DO, please know that a lot of us still wish to see this story come to completion, it's one of the deeper stories on this site. It's more like a good story that uses sex as an emphasis on the good writing already there, rather than just put there for the sake of smut.

I know that the inspiration of many artists and writers can be a fleeting thing, and some of the good writers can take a long time to update a story they have long worked on (The Kim Possible story "Bad as she wants me to be" comes to mind.) So if you've ever a mind to one day come back, we're all here waiting for the next chapter with eager eyes, even if we don't all review.

I have to agree with Pixel-king in saying that this story has given me cause to review. A smutty story is good, but one with a plot and defined characters is even better. In between classes for the last week, this story has been my guilty pleasure, and I know it is the same for every other reviewer. I believe that I can easily say for all the readers of this story, that you must continue. I know that from time to time an author can lose muse, but I do hope that you check your reviews and see that you have a following. It is too wonderful a story, and a rare one at that, to let it go unfinished. So please, pick it back up and begin writing again!!! Hope to hear from you soon!
-HeyArnoldFanatic

Where have you gone I want to see what happens next

Amazing story! It's much better than most other stories on this site, this one has a great plot, and very detailed character development... I would love to read more, please update soon!

This is the first review Iv ever done in all my years in reading fanfiction, but this story deserves it, it caught my attention with its unique premise, and held me there with great characterization and a well developed plot. The sexual scenes are tastefully done and well handled, and I can't wait for the story to finish, take your time and make sure to develop each chapter, and your sure not to disappoint, I have also read your previous stories and found them to my liking as well, keep up the good work.

Wow! Read the whole thing, this is a GREAT story!

You should totally continue, I mean its been at least a year or two since the last chapter. Surely there must've been some mock up of a Chapter 10.

Is there anyway you can continue the story?